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    Default Naruto Fanfiction: I Think I've Finally Found Him... QUIT LAUGHING KANKURO!! (4)

    Chapter 4 - Nature at Its Fullest



    My arm linked with Shikamaru's, we started off through Konoha's streets where all sorts of vendors were selling their stuff to young couples. There was Naruto, his arm around Hinata's waist, and Neji Hyuuga shyly held Tenten's hand. I spotted Asuma edging towards Kurenai, but noticed Sasuke alone fighting off fangirls. "Leave me alone....Quit mobbing me." He muttered, glaring at Ino. He looked, blushing slightly, at Sakura, and beconed her over. He whispered something in her ear, causing her to giggle, and they linked arms and left angry fangirls in their wake. "Awww..." I said, putting my head on Shikamaru's shoulder. "Oh joy, Mr. Heartbreaker's found a Queen to reign with him." "That's mean." "You haven't been with him all your life." My attention was drawn to a jewelry booth a few feet away, and I drifted over while Shikamaru went to a flower cart. I returned a few minutes later to where Shikamaru was waiting, a bouquet (sp?) of roses under his arm. He shyly held it out to me, studying the ground. "Shiiiiiiika that's so sweeeeet!!" I said, taking the flowers and kissing him on the nose. "It's nothing..." He murmered, taking one of the roses and putting it in my hair. I reached up to brush the flower, then smilied and started walking again. Soon we detoured from the road and went into the forest, still holding hands. We sat down underneath a huge oak tree and I set down the flowers, leaning on Shikamaru. He blushed slightly and wrapped an arm around my shoulders. A few minutes later, something hit Shikamaru's leg. it was my head; I was asleep with my head in his lap. He blinked, then smiled softly and kissed my forehead, my nose, and finally my mouth. "Hm..." I smiled in my sleep and purred with satisfaction. A second later, I woke up. "Shika," I said, yawning, "Will you show me what you look like with your hair down?" Shikamaru shook his head. "No way. Sorry, but I hate my hair down." "Pleeeeeeease." "No way, Temari." I considered, then smirked. "Ok." I said, making a few hand signs behind my back. "Chibi no Jutsu!" In a poof of smoke, I turned chibi-style. "You can't resist the cuteness." I said, my big glittery eyes remaining inoccent. Shikamaru blinked, then sighed. "All right, but reverse the chibi jutsu." I smiled and reversed the jutsu, going back to my normal look as he let his hair down. It fell to his shoulders with a few stray strands in his face, his silver earrings outlined againt it. "Shika, smile." I said, grinning myself. "You'd look cute if you weren't so grim." A smile tugged at the corners of Shikamaru's mouth, and finally he smiled. I gasped a little; he looked so handsome. I leaned forward and kissed him, running my fingers through his hair. He shifted so I wound up on his lap, but I didn't really mind. I linked my arms around his neck and he pulled away and kissed my forehead, raining kisses down my face to wind up at my lips again. "Hm...." I murmered, completely content.
    Silent as night
    And quick as lightning
    Something's inside me
    And man, is it fighting.
    It sends shivers down my spine
    Could it possibly be true?
    Is there any way at all
    That I might actaully love you?


    Yeah, I wrote it myself. Good or bad, it's my own words.






    ^
    Alright, I don't care if you're not a ShikaTema fan. You have to admit that picture is majorly cute.

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    wow this is good so good lol
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    thank you but I'm finding it hard to concentrate on this when Hovergirl keeps popping into my head
    Silent as night
    And quick as lightning
    Something's inside me
    And man, is it fighting.
    It sends shivers down my spine
    Could it possibly be true?
    Is there any way at all
    That I might actaully love you?


    Yeah, I wrote it myself. Good or bad, it's my own words.






    ^
    Alright, I don't care if you're not a ShikaTema fan. You have to admit that picture is majorly cute.

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    Aye, it's good, so what's with the hovergirl popping up into your head? Care to explain?
    "Perception is the only reality."

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    Quote Originally Posted by White_Fang1
    Aye, it's good, so what's with the hovergirl popping up into your head? Care to explain?
    it's a story I'm writing, but not a fanfiction and therefore not on these or any forums. That's about as far as I go short of writing the story out for you, at least as far as I've gotten.
    Silent as night
    And quick as lightning
    Something's inside me
    And man, is it fighting.
    It sends shivers down my spine
    Could it possibly be true?
    Is there any way at all
    That I might actaully love you?


    Yeah, I wrote it myself. Good or bad, it's my own words.






    ^
    Alright, I don't care if you're not a ShikaTema fan. You have to admit that picture is majorly cute.

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    You can post non-fanfiction here, you know that, right?

    And it's good so far, but I suggest formating it differently. When it's all bunched up, it's kind of hard to read. Like when someone speaks, make it a new line, and when someone else speaks, make it another line.

    You can be more descriptive too, but if you don't want to work on that now, you can always try that later.
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    Sorry, I'm awful at formatting. I'm used to writing this way. Yeah, I figured you can post non-fanfiction here, but I dunno if people would really understand my story. Maybe I'll do it. Supposing I decide to do it, how would I head it?
    Last edited by Hyku-San; 09-13-2006 at 03:30 PM.
    Silent as night
    And quick as lightning
    Something's inside me
    And man, is it fighting.
    It sends shivers down my spine
    Could it possibly be true?
    Is there any way at all
    That I might actaully love you?


    Yeah, I wrote it myself. Good or bad, it's my own words.






    ^
    Alright, I don't care if you're not a ShikaTema fan. You have to admit that picture is majorly cute.

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    ill read it.......ive read alot i might understand what it about?
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    well, taking a look at the title, being called Hovergirl you might asume a few things. Well, first of all, hover in the title refers to hoverboards; pretty much airborne skateboards. And there are gangs, hovergangs, to be precise, and some are good and some are bad. The girl, Isuki, is in a good gang, the Hover Hawks, and is infamous around where she lives as the Black Hawk and the only girl in a hovergang. The Hoverdogs are your typical gang, low-life and cruel street kids and all. The Hover Hawks and Hoverdogs are rivals, and the Hoverdogs especially hate Isuki because she turned down the invitation to join them and instead went to the Hover Hawks. If I went further it would make reading it no fun, so this is it. Tell me if you might like to read it.
    Silent as night
    And quick as lightning
    Something's inside me
    And man, is it fighting.
    It sends shivers down my spine
    Could it possibly be true?
    Is there any way at all
    That I might actaully love you?


    Yeah, I wrote it myself. Good or bad, it's my own words.






    ^
    Alright, I don't care if you're not a ShikaTema fan. You have to admit that picture is majorly cute.

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    i do want to read it it sounds good
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    really? Kool. I didn't think anyone would really like it. I'll put it out in a few days, but I've got a few other things on my hands and keybaord right now. lol
    Silent as night
    And quick as lightning
    Something's inside me
    And man, is it fighting.
    It sends shivers down my spine
    Could it possibly be true?
    Is there any way at all
    That I might actaully love you?


    Yeah, I wrote it myself. Good or bad, it's my own words.






    ^
    Alright, I don't care if you're not a ShikaTema fan. You have to admit that picture is majorly cute.

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    lol ok i cant wait to read it
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    ya might be waitin for a good bit, my life is insane. I've got like 7 other stories to mess with, so let me get a few of those straightened out. Plus schoolwork, not much but enough to keep my busy.
    Silent as night
    And quick as lightning
    Something's inside me
    And man, is it fighting.
    It sends shivers down my spine
    Could it possibly be true?
    Is there any way at all
    That I might actaully love you?


    Yeah, I wrote it myself. Good or bad, it's my own words.






    ^
    Alright, I don't care if you're not a ShikaTema fan. You have to admit that picture is majorly cute.

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    ok ill wait lol
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    oi guess what im writing it now and it's already on microsft word so copy, paste, post
    Silent as night
    And quick as lightning
    Something's inside me
    And man, is it fighting.
    It sends shivers down my spine
    Could it possibly be true?
    Is there any way at all
    That I might actaully love you?


    Yeah, I wrote it myself. Good or bad, it's my own words.






    ^
    Alright, I don't care if you're not a ShikaTema fan. You have to admit that picture is majorly cute.

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    Please stop replying to every post.

    And just hit enter after someone new starts speaking, that's a good new formating.
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