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    Oh dear father take the knife from you chest
    It is buried inside you and sings from your soul
    As the whole of the world is begging for rest
    Don’t you see that they will throw down into a hole
    Where you will drown on the things you keep in a box
    Underneath your mattress with the dreams of crow
    Who lies on the ground wings broken and rocks
    Back and forth as the agony within in him grows
    Will you take the spear that I offer to you
    Will you accept that it is all I can do
    As the ending show it will be that which we knew
    Crying out to the rain as it falls of the few
    Who were wise to escape please run to them now
    I will die hear and leave you a shovel to dig
    Up the bones you have hidden away and how
    Can you not hear the songs that they rig
    Up just for your don’t you see that the sun
    You have birthed is up in the sky
    And you can watch in your house as he starts to run
    And you can smile when he lays down to cry

    Oh dear mother will see what I give
    A impassioned speech that flows into space
    As in your garden of books, where you live
    You can see in the petals the shade of a face
    Crying out for your essence to fall into her
    But you can hold on thought you brain is a mess
    And it sinks to your feet and your vision is blur
    But there are glasses for that so expect nothing less
    Than the world to be bowed by the stone in the grass
    Shedding tears as you go to your soil bed
    And we wave good by and toss a rose made to last
    In the darkness beside you a pillow for you head
    But please remember us as you walk in the clouds
    Where thunder is brewing and crying for you
    As rain sweeps a way the gems that were shrouded
    With the mist of the lake where you used to do
    All the things that the gods forbade to us all
    But that is what made you strong and made you a queen
    With you scepter entwined with the heart of the call
    That I shout to you since you are trapped in man’s final dream

    Oh dear brother what has happened to those
    Words we traded while painting the stars
    And how we would make medicine out of women’s cloths
    And the shining rays of light that come from mars
    And how we would climb to the top of the school
    You’d pull me up and we laughed at the man in the moon
    Who would stare angry at us, that old fool
    As below you could hear the sad cry of a loon
    Now you have taken the road to the past
    Could not forgive that your queen faded away
    Casting blame like the daggers you kept till the last
    In your heart in your eyes as with venom you say
    In the city streets where you sigh and cry all alone
    Take the ashes you keep in your wallet and look
    How they glitter pale white and use them to come home
    I’ll be waiting and we will die once again
    Faded shadows of painting that philosopher’s eat
    Will hang above us again as we dance in the pain
    That we share like our blood as we go out to feed

    Oh dear sister you are a beautiful girl
    Like a maiden who sings from atop a golden cow
    But that has taken from you what you protect most in the world
    Now you can give it to no loving man now
    It was taken from you by a demon of gin
    Who in shadows had waited for you with a cross
    He screamed soulless to the stars as he put himself in
    And breaking you up he as filled you with loss
    I can do nothing, not give back what is gone
    As the trees carry you up in there branches and hands
    I will hold you and take you away from wrong-
    Headed world that has drowned you in pearly sand
    In your soul I know there is the girl that I love
    Who beside me would laugh as the world spun around
    On axis and would throw ceramic turtle doves
    From the window to watch them crash to the ground
    Take my hand we will show the world what it mean to be free
    I will give you the reasons you left in the trees
    And into each other we will give reason to be
    I have no girl and you are too broke so it’s just you and me



    I actually kind of want to say that this poem is about a family where the mother died and the daughter was raped. And how it caused the father to loose all confidence in the world and his progeny and made the brother run away. So this is from the other member trying to bring the pieces back together.

    Last edited by Luzifer; 09-09-2006 at 08:04 PM.
    The tragedy of life comes not from pain, despair, sorrow, or even death; but the constant annihilating amnesia that begs us to forget we live.


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    Hey, I like it. ^^

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    Your writing carries some unique traits, one of the most original people I've seen with your kind of talent. Though it should be said that there are many paths to the top (just in case any other AF poet is reading this), but you've got a knack for painting a vivid picture with every sentence.

    Actually, I've read quite a few of your works -- one of them that caught my eye was "The Murderer's Brand" (I think that's what it's called). You've got something serious going on up in your head, and I think you should keep going with it.
    life is an existential carousel... (journal update: dec 12 2006) //// dawnrune made my avy. he also made a sig for me, but I'm going to retire it. (looking for a replacement set! but I have no money. interested in helping? PM me.)
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