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Silver Tears
Silver Tears,
Fall At Night,
Silver Tears,
Blur Her Sight,
Silver Tears,
Never Again,
Silver Tears,
Is This The End?
It's not finishes, I just got bored in one of my classes a few days ago. School has started so that means bordom and guess what that means? POEMS! Yay.
Last edited by Vendetta; 09-12-2006 at 10:04 PM. Reason: Typo.
Set made by me98% or teens do or have tried pot :: If you're one of the 2% that hasn't post this in your signature::
It's very good ^.^ Although there's a tiny typo in the last "silver" of your poem.
I like the style, but if it was just out of pure boredom, this poem doesn't seem to go anywhere. Anyway, I'll wait for your next poems. ^^
Most of my poems have emotion, actaully all of them do It's just sometimes a little hard to see what I'm talking about or to understand what I say, how it relates to me.
Set made by me98% or teens do or have tried pot :: If you're one of the 2% that hasn't post this in your signature::
Ah now I understand. Well, it's the same with me too. ^^
Oh and btw: Sorry for the "silver" typo, I don't think there was any, or maybe you corrected it. Ah, clueless weather today, isn't it? xD
Anyway, I look forward to more poems from you.
Thanks for the comment, and yes I fixed that typo.
Set made by me98% or teens do or have tried pot :: If you're one of the 2% that hasn't post this in your signature::
its good. and i cant wait to see more. and dorian grey will close your thread if you keep posting back and forth.(just warning no disrespect) and plz write more your poems are intresting.
-Just tell me baby, Tell me I'm crazy, You know it's what makes your heart scream "Take me"..-Mithrosent
I think that it is a wonderful poem so far. Keep up the good work ^^
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