Revolutionary Girl Utena

**Daenerys** · 08-31-2006 09:46 PM

This is my first ANIME wallpaper... I've made a few video game ones before, but this is my first anime one... I 'unno how I really feel about it. This is like my third wallpaper ever.

Sadly, I couldn't make it in my resolution, it didn't work out. (It's like 1400x something, I forget)

**Ωmega** · 08-31-2006 10:03 PM

hmm, the brushes pop out a bit too much, it kinda fights for attention with Utena. My suggestion would to use the blur tool, or put your brushes on a new layer and then change the ocupancy so it doesnt pop out as much...but its really pretty!

**Daenerys** · 08-31-2006 10:13 PM

Well my icons cover the stuff on the left, so it doesn't really bother me. It doesn't stand out if I do anything else with it under a mass of icons.

But I'll try making a version with softer tones.

edited with second version of the wall.

**Ωmega** · 08-31-2006 10:31 PM

oooooo, Now its perfect! -saves it- ^.^

**Capernicus** · 08-31-2006 11:33 PM

Oooo, I like it. Topless chick. Yesh. My new desktop. *saves*

**Fabala** · 09-01-2006 09:05 AM

Hmmm...my only real issue with it is the brushing effects seen in the bottom left corner. Looks...boxy, and like a big chunk is missing o.O Is that what the brush intends, or is there something in front of it?

**MistressPookyChan** · 09-01-2006 10:35 AM

I agree with Reiako. Also, the font is cut off a bit on top.

**Daenerys** · 09-01-2006 03:09 PM

I was wondering when someone was gonna bring up the text. I just grabbed a random text, and put it on there. I really, really, really don't like the text. I actually looked for an hour at Dafont.com for fonts (HALF OF THE ONES THAT WERE COOL.... WERE CORRUPTED FILES ;_; ) and I didn't find any that seemed to fit with the wallpaper.

The bottom left corner... I'm kind of confused by boxy, and like it's missing something.

You mean ABOVE the bottom left? Like how that's kinda empty? Or do you mean how the bottom left kind of resembles a box? I think the bottom left is too crowded, if anything. I'll try playing with that when I get on my laptop.

I'll try fixing the text too, but I don't think there's a good font out there, so I might just take it off.

**Cantelope** · 09-01-2006 05:18 PM

When they say boxy, I believe they're mentioning the way your brushwork suddenly cuts off to the lower left of her shoulder. I believe that brush was corner cut, and in any case, you'll either have to redo the brushing(extreme) or you can just simply run the eraser tool over it, 150-200 px size, Hardness 0% and maybe airbrushing enabled. Just run the edge of the brush against it to make it "fade".

I've located the problem for you.

**Daenerys** · 09-01-2006 10:02 PM

Oh yeah, what the hell is that? Lemme see if I can fix that.

**-Batman-** · 09-04-2006 11:22 PM

In my opinion, other then the things stated, I would either remove the text, change it in some way, or change the glow color. The wallpaper is in diffrent hues of pink, so the black glow of the text makes it stand out more than it should, which is bad because it's also in the top corner. Other than the text, the rest of it's already been commented on.