Fatal Night

[Treyu]

Fatal Night

I feel her,

Even though she is gone.

I can feel the searing pain,

Long after her death.

I can hear her cries,

Feel her tears on my cheek.

I wake during nights,

In cold sweats.

She is gone,

Yet still here.

I can feel my bones break,

That fatal night.

I remember our scream,

And the empty blackness that followed.

I could see her blue eyes,

I knew she could see mine.

I could feel our connection dwindle,

Then snap and dissipate.

I knew it then,

That she was gone.

My friend, my sister.

My twin of many years.

Gone like a whisper in the dark,

And even now she calls to me.

From the depths of death,

She calls for me to join her.

And so I wait,

For my time to come.

And then I as well will be taken,

And we will be together again.

Authors Notes: Havn't written one in a while. This is what I thought it might be like to lose my twin sister...

[Furubalova]

gosh it makes me think about my sister *thinks*..... i like it (i wonder what it WOULD be like?...)

[Treyu]

It would suck ^.^

Me and my sister arn't close, but I always get sympathy pains and what not.

Plus, I would be reminded of her every time I looked at my tattoo because we have matching ones ;_;

I <33 Her to death though, thanks for the comment!

[Aleyna]

that was a suspensing poem, it brought alotta scary images too me, lol good work

[Treyu]

Huzzah for imagry!

Thanks Bloody ^.^

[hybridInuyasha]

wow...a lot of imagery in that poem...even though i've seen too many poems about sisters...keep up the good work ^^

[onigiri princess]

I totally agree, it makes me think of my sister although she is my younger sister lolz, but it was greate, a bit scary but i just loved it, hope i see more poems.