Forgotten By You

[Luck_Sharingan_Sakura]

Umm...this is my first poem...I wanted to post it but was too shy...plz nice comments...and this is not how I feel....
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I stand here right besides you
Trying to pretend you know i'm here
But day after day you ask me who I am
I tell you my name and
you always say you didn't see me
You pushed me aside like i'm nothing to you
And now I know you never loved me
So I left you alone so you can have happiness
But one day you'll soon realize that you'll need me
And I won't be there to help you
So you realize what you've did
But it'll be to late
All I can say is we're done
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it hardly rhymes

[Furubalova]

i can identify with this a lot.... lol but it's good.

[Kagome_423]

it's a nice poem. ^_^;;

[Aleyna]

what a very cute poem for a beginner, i can't wait to see more of your works