 AnimeGalleries [dot] Net |  AnimeWallpapers [dot] Com |  AnimePedia [dot] Com |  AnimeGlobe [dot] Com |
I Wonder
I wonder,
What will you respond,
When I say those 3 words?
I wonder,
If I said those 3 words,
Will I be rejected?
Stay as friends?
Become lovers?
Or will you just ignore me?
I wonder,
How do you feel towards me,
Even when we both are far away apart..?
What will you say...?
[[ ~Missing the old アンティック-珈琲店~ ]]
________________________________________
An Cafe
Antic Cafe
Antique Cafe
wow....even if this poem doesn't rhyme...it is a real good poem because it has a purpose for someone....keep on writing and u will get better!
Aw. Thanks Kohaex.
^ ^
But your much better than me of course. I'll keep writing. For sure.
^ ^
[[ ~Missing the old アンティック-珈琲店~ ]]
________________________________________
An Cafe
Antic Cafe
Antique Cafe
nice poem... good job. keep geting better
its so nice (and sad in between)
I fear...muffins.....instead I could use a cookie <Hurray> COOKIES!^^
Aw. Thanks you two. Thanks for the comments everyone!
[[ ~Missing the old アンティック-珈琲店~ ]]
________________________________________
An Cafe
Antic Cafe
Antique Cafe
great poem...and who said short poems aren't good^^
those words are deep^^
The past may hurt,
the past may shine.
But without it, then there would be nothing.
Without the future soon to be past,
we would not exist, and neither would it.
Past is like sun, shining on the roses.
Past tastes like revenge at times.
Past smells like friendship at others.
Although the past can be peaceful,
it may also be painful.
So just for the record,
don't dwell on the past, or it will dwell on you.
great poem, each word feels like it really came from deep down in ur heart. keep posting and keep writing lol ^^
*lost in the world of broken and dead hearts,
traped in the mist of ones who lied,
confused by how foolish i am ,
wanting to disappear in my world alone with ones who care for me,
is that forbidden to ask that-tell me someone*
sig by Nespa thank u so much ur awsome !!! lol ^.^
the famous Crimson Soul the best stalker ever
Sweet poem its very deep too i liked it.
Pm Me If You Want To Be Friends!
Aw. Thanks guys. Im really glad you read the poem. Thank You for the wonderful comments.
[[ ~Missing the old アンティック-珈琲店~ ]]
________________________________________
An Cafe
Antic Cafe
Antique Cafe
its great! i love the feeling you put into it with it being a short poem! keep up the great work!
-Just tell me baby, Tell me I'm crazy, You know it's what makes your heart scream "Take me"..-Mithrosent
I think it's a great poem, I would like to see some more from you ^^
Thanks darkfairy. Thanks Lanka.
^ ^
I really apreciate it.
[[ ~Missing the old アンティック-珈琲店~ ]]
________________________________________
An Cafe
Antic Cafe
Antique Cafe
Ah, very subtle yet strait to the point... but still giving an unknown feeling.
Very nice work Sakura! ^_^
Perhaps the world was never meant to make perfect sense.
yah id give it 4 outa 10 good work
Odi et amo. quare id faciam, fortasse requiris?
nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior.
Thanks Tetsanosuke. I really appreciate your comment. Thanks for taking your time to read my poem.
[[ ~Missing the old アンティック-珈琲店~ ]]
________________________________________
An Cafe
Antic Cafe
Antique Cafe
^ ^ I gotta hand it to ya Sakura, it's an a-okay or a great poem. Keep it up! Always do your best!
Careful, I don't take you lightly.Sig set made by Daken_________________________________________________S. O. S. Finest Swordmaster
Please stop thanking everyone, that's just as spammy as half of the spammy replies you got in this topic.
There are currently 1 users browsing this thread. (0 members and 1 guests)
Posting Permissions
Reply With Quote
Bookmarks