Miss you

[LittleMomo]

Oh how I miss you,
wherever you are,
you miss me too,
because we are far.

I send you my voice,
to remind you I'm here,
I don't have a choice,
but to try to be near.

I wish you were beside me,
just to spend time together,
I know we will you will see,
we'll be together whenever.

I just miss you,
and hope that you miss me too...
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^_^ enjoy everyone, even though I think it's a bad poem.

[Furubalova]

its not bad, its good^^!

[DarkMoonPrince]

This poem is beautiful, i actually understand it.

[Daimastuny]

It's a very good, poem, not one of your best, but it still sends the message to people. Now don't be like that, everything is good, except for one line. It doesn't make sense, but good job and keep on writing JFL.

[Kiss of Death]

wery good... thanx...

[mimichan1000]

As always, your poems are great!

Keep it up

[KRPrincess24]

I love that poem!!! keep up the good work!

[yami hatake]

Its a great poem Lucky it really is..I can't wait until you'll be able to post more poems..you have the best poems ever!!..

[suky]

Hmmm, I wonder, I wonder to whom this is to? XD anyways it's a lovely poem jumpy I love it all, I don't have any real criticism, but I just love your poems =3 keep writing jumpy I want to see more!

[Twilight Angel Kohaex]

hey....no matter what u think....this is a real good poem...its for someone out there, and if that person got it or already did, they'll like it!

Check for my poems if u want ideas!! i don't mind!