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    This was a great chapter, I like a bit of mystery in a story. You are doing pretty good, with the female character, but I too am a guy so what do I know. Anyway, can't wait to read chapter three.

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    I really liked the chapter...it's all so mysterious and I like how you described the thoughts of Tari...you are very talented...Even if it was a little hard for me to read (just because my native language is not English) it caught my attention from the start. Keep it up..you are doing a great job! And yeah you are getting feminine stuff right, at least in my opinion.



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