The Wolf Spirit

[Ookie]

Sorry friends… I’ve really got this thing bout shortening poems : … I wrote this long ago but was too shy to put it up…Since my name means wolf well... Any ways, the poem It’s about The Wolf Spirit

Swift and never forlorn,

Run oh wolf without scorn

Fur which blends into the night,

Run oh wolf in all your might,



Past the rare streams and towering needle trees,

Ignoring the day’s heat and night’s freeze,

Run oh wolf into the desert land,

Think not of the wind or sand!



Let no other pack intercept,

Let every human go unseen and unmet,

Ignore the sweet smell of food,

No! Run wolf! Life is crude!



Sleep nor night or day,

Fear no predator, dominate your prey!

Keep on running my dear wolf,

Past the approaching gulf!



Tread the water! Do not fear!

Whatever you do I’ll be near!

Call to me every night,

Describe to me every sight!



You might have to travel the world all over,

Alas you’ll run like one searching, for a lost lover!

Think of nothing but my soul!

Ignore the lies of others foul!



You my wolf! My guardian spirit!

I will wait a hundred years for it!

For that wonderful day,

When together we will finally stay!



Let every time I with sorrow say why me?

You be there with me!

And with you my dear ookami,

Safe forever I will be…



So think of nothing wolf of mine,

I’ll wait till the end of time,

For that moment we’re destined to share,

Our souls bound together, right here…



So run dear spirit wolf in all your might!

With that fur blending into the night,

Swift and never forlorn,

Run to my reikon!

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*ookami -> wolf

*reikon -> soul

Any opinions?

[Kitanoru]

Wow, marvelous poem -Ookami- Well done!! Keep up the great work!! I absolutely loved it!

PS: (was curious too, if you wouldn't mind making me a fan button. If it isn't to much trouble that is. I would really enjoy it if it could be a fan button of a character out of Utawarerumono if you could, that would be superb! Thanks)

[Ookie]

Working on it Viper ^^ As soon as you sen me the pic ^^ then it would be up in my gallery ^^

[Saisashi~Arashi]

interesting... its flow isn't that good, and some words don't rhyme, but all the same, great poem.

[KaylaCat1010]

This is a very nice poem you made I like how you compaired the fur to the night it was very clever I thought. I hope you can make more of these ^^ and I love the picture

[vixen_wolf]

yay!!!!!! wolves i luv it good job!!!! you have my aprovel on that one straite from wolf head quarters!!!!! awroooooooooo and huzzah to that!

[Junpei Kurono]

Nice, -Ookami- i really enjoyed it..yeah and i was wondering if i could have an -Ookami- Fan button for i'll be waiting for more of your poems..o.o
P.S.(you're a Kai fan? That's cool...Kai is the best beyblader...>>; )

[Ookie]

Of course you can! All you hav et do is right click on it and save it... then upload it to your sig ^^ (bet you knew that

I will write more poems and hell yeah... Kai is the best beyblader ^^

[FullMetalAlchemist997]

yah very good...I've got some poems in my journal though i'm to shy to put them up. Any way this is great and keep up the good work.

P.S. So you Like Kai me too.

[Ookie]

Kai rulz ^^ You should put your poems up ^^ i'd like to see them ^^

[BloodSpill]

Awsome mate...keep up the good work ^^!

[Ookie]

Thank you!

I love wolves ^^

[Junpei Kurono]

Thanks -Ookami- i'm just slow at times...

>>;;

[Kittyninjamewmew]

that wuz an awesome poem -Ookami-! i loved it! i bet my sister wouldn't be able to resist it!

[Daenerys]

Can I please ask that everyone post helpful replies instead of "wow dats cool"

It's spam.