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    Oh woman please hear the heart that beats
    In your chest deep beside dreams and your idleness
    the fire poker you have used wants to hear you defeat
    all the things you have held when you had nothing less


    Oh woman please, feel the pulse of your brain
    As it sings for you to go out and dance in the rain
    While the wives in the rooms are numb to the pain
    Of the things you have seen in your mirror that gleams


    Oh woman please, sing the songs that you had
    Back when they all said your soul was a fad
    That would pass in good time if youíd only let go
    Prove to them that your spirit wasnít for show


    Oh woman please, find the rooms in the bed
    Where your mother gave birth out in the shed
    As you cried for the arms of the god that is gone
    Sought the street that no woman ever has swam


    Oh woman please, take the road that you need
    While the shackles you love they will slowly bleed
    And you will dance on the isle where you are now freed
    Hopeís a shell for the unicorn which died in the reeds


    Oh woman please, pull the sand from the shore
    While the spinster woman plays meaningful chords
    And your body is yearning for you to explore
    All the dark little holes that no one has seen there before


    Oh woman please, seek the sun in the moon
    Though the search makes you dizzy and swoon
    And the ashes of things that you left for dead
    Start to creep in your heart through your head


    Oh woman please, shut the door to my room
    For your presence makes me smile too soon
    You are stronger then I will ever be
    So take my sword if you it will please


    Oh woman please, love only yourself
    Though you must put your friends up on the shelf
    Where they will scorn you for all time and will sling
    Arrows at you- donít mind their attacks


    Oh woman please, be as strong as you can
    When you go take the world in your hand
    Donít let the fiends tell you horrible lies
    For I know you will win if you donít compromise


    Oh woman please, let me take down you life
    To the pages of fate that are worn and off-white
    And sing your ballads to the children of old
    And let you rest in the Valhalla of gold


    Oh woman please, shake your fist at the gods
    Let them hear your voice let them suffer in vain
    As they beg to be strong or as weak as can be
    Let them see in you the power of pain


    Oh woman please, taste the ambrosia of you
    See the world covered up with your dew
    That comes from your teeth and your tongue as you draw
    All the things that you love on paper of moss


    Oh woman please, save yourself from the sea
    Which will drown you in everyday life and duty
    Place yourself at the head of the silk caravan
    As it pushes through the desert like a arrow through sand


    Oh woman please, kiss the sun it wonít burn
    Know yourself and thatís all you need learn
    And the sandpaper issues will fade in the light
    Of the bright pearly moon of a love frosted night


    Oh woman please, you havenít committed a crime
    Only balanced yourself on the edge of a dime
    You have all that you need buried deep in yourself
    So I shall go and be alone by myself


    Oh woman please donít concern yourself with me
    Ignore me and find the path to be free
    I will watch from afar as you sleep in the sun
    With your soul in the trees and in your pocket a gun



    I feel that I must say I wrote this while reading Kate Chopin's the Awakening, a proto-feminist novel from the 1890s. So that might give you a hint about what I'm saying.
    The tragedy of life comes not from pain, despair, sorrow, or even death; but the constant annihilating amnesia that begs us to forget we live.


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    i really enjoyed reading this poem, it reminds me of a folk song for some off reason but thats what makes it interesting ^-^

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