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    Default The black rose

    There is a rose in a garden that is diffrent from all the others
    The rose is black and has a gray stem
    Some people would say that it is ugly but I like it
    I look at the flower and it seems so gentle and delicate even though it is black
    When I am feeling down and people make fun of my I think of that flower and I ignore there words and go back to being me
    Ever since I have seen that flower I have though of myself and went to being me
    Everyone thinks that I am just crazy for liking that flower so much
    I do not speak to them I just go on my way
    I think of that rose and it reminds me of someone it reminds me of me
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    I wrote this because at school my teacher says I am one of a kind well I wanted to compare it to roses and this is what I came up with ^_^ hope you like it
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    It's very nice! I really enjoyed reading it. You may want to include more rhythm to it, but it is very good otherwise. Great job! Keep up the great work!

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    i love it! good job, i like the tiltle and everything! you're really talented!
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    thank you both I am glad you like my writing so much I will make more of these ^^
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    Wow it's really amazing. Well done. Hope to see more of your Poems around here
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    it's good keep up the good work!^_^
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    Thank you I will make more of these poems ^^
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