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    Default How I long For You

    How I Long



    How I long for you my love.

    I can’t wait for that day to come,

    The day that we will be together,

    That time must come.



    I long for the warmth,

    The warmth of your love.

    A kiss from your lips is what I want to receive,

    From someone as pure and beautiful as a dove.



    I long for you… I long to be by your side.

    What am I to you?

    A guardian? A lover?

    I admit that I feel that I am both.



    I was at first your guardian,

    I decided to watch over you when we first met.

    Yet something strange has developed.

    Something new has been set.





    What is this feeling,

    A feeling that keeps on growing?

    My heart throbs harder and harder.

    Then it struck me so suddenly,

    I was also your lover.



    Each passing day, the more I long for you.

    Step by step, all in due time,

    Our dreams will surely come true.

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    It's been a long time since I posted here. I'm not sure but I think my poem making skills are getting rusty. Of course this poem is for S.L.E. Have a nice day...Love ya'h
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    Real nice job!!! keep up the work mate ^^


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    Eh, who doesn't get rusty now and then, anywho good job I actually like it kido. It's sweet and very lovely, but your flow still needs work, keep on writing kido, because I hope to see more from you.

    Much love, ~dai

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    nice

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    thats nice, but as DAIMASUKI said, your flow needs some work.
    its really nice.

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