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    Default Can U Ppl Give Me A Rating Or Tips.....

    hi everyone.
    despite the countless times animewallpapers.com has tried to bring my spirits down, and make me all depresed, and give up at life, and kill my self by not acceptign my wallpapers, i keep on trying. this is my lates wall.
    plz tell me hwo can i make this better.
    and moderatos from AW, if u dont like it just tell me so. so i dont have to waste time, and get my spirits up so u guys can just crush them by nto accepting my beautifull art. lol
    anyways let me know what u think
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    tell em how to submit them cuz i think i am doing it wrong.
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    Default and one more thing

    when reffereing to a pictures format,
    is jpeg the same as jpg?
    thx in advance.

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    Hi pab, the naruto sorce image... it looks kina washed out, and the outline is not,
    the red backgrude is nice, but u may need to re-think the text font with the red stroked border, in general its a good start but i think u need to resample the main img.

    And yes , a jpeg is a jpg file =)

    keep on working, and good luck

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    we don't use rating in the AW forum, so you may not want to ask for that.

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    Hmm, the red background coud use some dark parts too; it's just too... simple red.
    Naruto, inside the borders, looks too washed out; You need to lower Brigthness and highten Contrast to make him look better.

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    Default i see i see

    thanks,il anounce when i post the modified one

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    i think its ok the way it is.......it seemz to be a great wallpaper to me^-^

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    Quote Originally Posted by Xieshunnuan
    i think its ok the way it is.......it seemz to be a great wallpaper to me^-^
    my, my. thank you
    i will update it on sunday, i just want to get some advice first.

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    The font is too pixellated and uninteresting. Antialias those jaggies, and try something different with the letters - maybe skew them around a bit, or overlap them slightly? The black line around the character is also too jagged.

    I like the red fireball background. It's random and it looks interesting.

    The character is too washed out against the vivid red background. You could try maybe making the entire character various shades of red; that might be interesting.

    The character looks a little bit like he's floating; his heels aren't on the ground. Maybe move the bottom edge of the 'fireball' background up above his heels, to give him the illusion of a floor?

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    i had to boot my computer but im back
    sorry it took me soo long.
    hows this one?
    should i make him washed otu again?
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    the render needs to be redone. and it looks like it has an opacity but it doesnt so it doesnt look good. the latters look to jeged and should be more smooth. i dont know what alse u should do. oh yeahu should have a bigger render its to small.


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    render means size?
    like 1024x768?
    right?

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    The character is better now, less washed out; but in front of such a vivid red, he needs to be much more vivid himself.

    I really like the curved lines you've added behind the text (though you need to use antialiasing on it; the long narrow stretches are pixellated). The letters themselves still need to be less jagged.

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    i think it looks good. Naruto is awesome and that wallpaper should be accetpted. I mean look at my piece of junk. i'll never bother finishing it because I fear it will fail.

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    In my great opinion, your latest wallpaper looks pretty good. I personally like it and it's good you can accept criticism and attempt to improve like you have done.

    It earns the seal of approval

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    Hi there. I'm new around here, but I saw this and thought I'd add a comment.

    You have a great design here, well worth going forward with. One thing that others have said is correct. Naruto needs to be all the more darker than he is. Up the contrast, and I mean way up. Also, the color pallete (colors used in the art) seems to be monochromatic, using reds, browns, yellows, oranges... Try picking a couple of elements and invert the color on them. This will give it some of that coveted "snap" that a wallpaper needs to stand out.

    Other than that, it's a great design and a good effort. Kerio!

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    It looks a lot better. One issue I have is with the jagged edges around the letters.

    Also, I would adjust the levels of the character. See how Naruto is washed out/lighter than the rest of the wall? Adjusting the levels can help make his colors more vivid.

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    the chara is better on the second one but it´s black outlines still look a little jagged
    (maybe try to get rid of it completely or reduce it some more)...
    due to the nature of the drawing (or its paintingstyle to be exact [looks more handpainted than colored per pc]) you should try some filters to make it match the background better...or do what pooky said...
    as for the bg i liked the lines on the first one better...the second one´s lines look too disctracting...
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    Hmm...I like the image of Naruto looks a bit washed out, and the brightness of the colors make it look dull.

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    I like your idea for the background, and I love that fiery swirly background. However, I like your second attempt better than your first. Mainly because you got rid of the "wash-out" on Naruto. I think that your Naruto source image is overwhelmed by the clarity and brightess of the background. I've seen backgrounds with this image done before, but usually they are done with a manilla textured background kind of like paper that is bland in comparison to the colored-pencil style of coloring done on the Naruto character you have.

    I think you can still improve on the wallpaper by recoloring your source image. Also as others have noticed, there are many jagged edges on your letters and black outline of Naruto. In case you didn't know how to fix that since no one mentioned it, you just need to run a blur tool over the jagged outlines and that's it. Look forward to your final presentation.

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