My New Drawings

**Sinnaku** · 07-28-2006 01:08 AM

I get bored rather regularly. This is what I do when I get bored.

**BlackZephyrus** · 07-28-2006 01:14 AM

"They aren't too bad. How mcuh of a critique would you like? If any at all..."

**Sinnaku** · 07-28-2006 01:19 AM

Critique... lol.

Doesn't matter.

**BlackZephyrus** · 07-28-2006 01:27 AM

"You sure? Alright then....keep in mind I'm not an artist myself, just an art lover. The first picture seems to be fuzzy for starters. The hair doesn't have any texture other than it may have been carved out of styrofoam. There's no texture to the style, it needs to look like hair, not a white blob. The shirt doesn't look realistic enough, the wrinkles do not flow and do not fit the shirt or position. The eyes look a bit like scribbles and not much like eyes, also the face needs a more precise shape. I take it you don't like to draw hands? For the length of the shirt and broadness of his shoulders, the legs look to short. Also, the pants don't look very realistic with the lack of proper creases or wrinkles. The shoes don't match eachother in proportion, but I do like the zipper idea on the bottoms of the pant legs." Sweatdrops a bit and pauses, "You want me to do the other one too? Or is this enough?"

**Sasuke is God** · 07-28-2006 01:27 AM

well they aren't the greatest...but there still good!!

**the_last_icarian** · 07-28-2006 01:33 AM

I can say it's pretty good, but I can give some constuctive critisism. ^^

**sensuki** · 07-31-2006 10:13 AM

I'm a bit harsh when it comes to arts and drawings sometimes (cuz I'm an anime artist), okay, the first one, isn't really that good. It's a fine drawing, but, the head is a little too small and the shoulders have to be a little more curvy. the right arm has too be a little more thinner (I'm not saying that's his right arm isn't really that fat like, omg), the elbow has too be a little closer to the top and the legs have to be a little bit longer but if he was wearing a big t-shirt then the legs would have to look short. The eyes look bad because it has to show up more and where the heck are the ears?!!does that mean that he can't hear anything or what? The second one is very good except the skyscrapers are a little too close to eachother. That's all i have to say.