Broken-Hearted Little Me

[otakuyume]

July 21, 2006, 5:50 pm

*To my many faithful readers and anyone who has lost a loved one. This was originally a song idea I was doodling down at this time in front of the keyboard but...Well this is what came out! Lol! X3*

Broken-Hearted Little Me

To Die so soon...
As I fall away from you.
Why so sad...?
I know the past has been bad.
But take away these tears,
and erase all these fears.
I need to be reminded of our time.
Even though it's death was a crime.

Help me to see once more.
I don't want to be the one to slam the door.
I can't stand...
Locking myself away in a Never-Land.
I'm so sick...Of missing you.
Because I know our feelings were true.

You betrayed me.
You lost me.
But why is it that I don't want to be free...
Of your fleeting touch....
Even though it was never much?

How is it that blackened chains of the heart...
Can keep me here at the very start?
I want you to go...
But I just can't say "no".
I'm addicted to you and I'm lost inside my mind.
If you come back, what will you find?

The broken-hearted little me.
...That's what you'll see.

*tears are half way down her cheeks*

Otaku that was amazing, magnificent, great beyond recognition. It's amazing and you all ready know you're great. I like the way you continue to use simple words and make them seem really meaningful, otaku your really talented and please keep writing, you know I'll always praise you for it.

[DarkMoonPrince]

Oh my god. . . .Wow.....This poem is the most beautiful poem i've ever read. . . . Daimasuki is right about everything, you are talented, And from you, I wish to see more poems if you have any. I really do feel the emotion from this poem . . .It is very beutiful.