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    Default What would you say?

    When I look at you I don't care about you
    Your a princess I'm a peasent
    You control the world; I control a farm
    You tax me beyond my budget; I never complain

    When I look at my land, I look at my livelihood
    I look at what pays for the house
    I see nothing but successful hard work
    I see my hard work paying off

    But when you come to my land
    I see you want everything taken from me
    My livelihood, my money, my home
    and yet I never complain when I see you

    I don't know why you torture me
    With your constant threats
    I don't see why you control me
    When I try to live

    So now I say to you right in your face
    Now that I have your attention...
    What would you say?
    If I said I loved you Princess?

    I said it to you
    Now you my feelings
    Because no matter how much you want
    I will always love you

    -Crystal_Gardevoir to a certain girl I found in my long travels
    The Sins of my Past will Drive my journey to my Purity in the future...
    I am on a long journey to redeem myself of Bad Rep...



    It's Humbling yet pathetic...

    Even if it's a small step, it's still progress, no matter how you look at it.

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    ooooOOOooh!*poke, poke* CG! *cough* sorry, anyways really good poem. It's nicely done, but at the end I think you did a mistake on,
    Quote Originally Posted by Crystal_Gardevoir
    Now you my feelings...
    Shouldn't it be 'Now you know my feelings..'? anyways good job, keep it up ^ ^ and good luck with the girl ^ ~

    ~dai

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    It's a pretty good poem, I like it ^.^

    Hope to see another one soon.

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