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    Default The Zodiac

    The Zodiac

    She wears the stars,
    In her eyes,
    Like tears that she’s about to cry.

    She weeps for what,
    No one knows.
    But down her cheek one tear does role.

    She looks up,
    To search the sky,
    Who knows what she will find.

    A single word
    Does grace her lips,
    Speaking of her first kiss.

    As the night ends,
    The moonlight calls,
    Summoning her back from the earth below.

    She sighs and stares
    Blankly around.
    Looking for something that cannot be found.

    As the sun rises,
    She takes a step.
    And ascends to the heavens to be alone.

    For she is the stars,
    That orbit the sky.
    She is one of the Zodiac.

    A heavenly maiden,
    For all her life to be
    The Virgo in the night sky.


    Authors Notes: A new one... always to do with the stars it seems, I will try to write a new Poem that is less... night skyish XD... Hope you enjoy! OH! And I know some of the lines... well quite frankly they just dont work ^.^' But it is 1215 at night/morning... so I couldnt think of anything else ^.^;
    Last edited by Fabala; 07-18-2008 at 10:54 PM. Reason: removed text color


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    Well I enjoyed it anyway ^_^
    I thought it was beautiful for what you could do for writing it so late/early
    I love poems with the night sky involved

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    Uhhmmmm.... Nice poem huh! I'll rate it...... JOB WELL DONE!



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    Thank you all.

    I am attempting to fix the minor errors now... I will leave another note when it has changed a bit XD


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    Hello

    Awwww i really love your poem

    i hope to get more for you

    Ayame x



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