You Left

[Sakura Holic]

In the dark,
All lonley,
With no one else,
But me.
You left me,
Right in this very spot.
But you said a few things,
Before you left.

"Dont worry. Your not alone."
I know...

"I'll always be with you."
Same to you too...

"Don't ever change."
Don't you change either...

"I will always be in your heart."
I know. You always say that...

"I love you."
I love you too...

I smilied.
Knowing that you are here.
In my thoughts,
In my heart.
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Hope you all like it. Enjoy~

[cherryblosmes]

no it wasnt a bad poem. well i wouldnt really condir it a poem it has a actaull name for it. dont worry that was good. not bad at al ^^ i mean there is a branch in poetry that has this type of poetry. that was good keep posting ^^

[.mystic]

i agree with most people here. It sort of hit me. You see i feel really um.. bad at the moment. i guess it could be a bit of guilt but nether the less i feel bad and sad and angry right at the moment so a sad poem does me good. I love the poem. keep on writing. infact i may go write a poem of how horrible i feel at the moment. ta. xD

[BlazingSoul]

That was good and cute, I like it. Good job. I can sense you put a lot of emotion in it too.

[Sakura Holic]

Aw. Thanks everyone. I really love your comments you posted here.

[Daenerys]

I never want to have to delete that many replies in a poem again. Next time, there will be severe consequences for the postee's.