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    Destinys Wings

    Her head was bowed.
    Her eyes closed.
    A mist about her feet.

    She held her pose,
    Her type of grace.
    For elegant was she.

    A snap of a twig.
    A traveler by night,
    Looks at the maidens wings.

    She snaps up her head,
    Her eyes round and wide.
    And the wind lifts her up off her feet.

    She shoots out her arms,
    Violet eyes aglow.
    Silver hair hovering about her face.

    Looking heavenward.
    She whispers soft spells.
    That will carry her soul away.

    A glowing light.
    Soft musical sounds,
    And the traveler stands all alone.

    Where the lady went,
    Who she was.
    No one will ever know.



    Authors Note: Thanks to Viper for the Title... it is perfect <33
    Last edited by Fabala; 07-18-2008 at 10:47 PM. Reason: removed text color

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    The Curious Wanderer Kitanoru has a reputation beyond repute Kitanoru has a reputation beyond repute Kitanoru has a reputation beyond repute Kitanoru has a reputation beyond repute Kitanoru has a reputation beyond repute Kitanoru has a reputation beyond repute Kitanoru has a reputation beyond repute Kitanoru has a reputation beyond repute Kitanoru has a reputation beyond repute Kitanoru has a reputation beyond repute Kitanoru has a reputation beyond repute Kitanoru's Avatar
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    Wow, excellent poem, I love the imagery, and the descriptive text in your poem Treyu!
    Great Job, Keep up the good work! I look forward to reading more of your poetry in the near future ^^

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    Just because Treyu has much to be proud of Treyu has much to be proud of Treyu has much to be proud of Treyu has much to be proud of Treyu has much to be proud of Treyu has much to be proud of Treyu has much to be proud of Treyu has much to be proud of Treyu has much to be proud of Treyu's Avatar
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    Thank You!

    I am working on another piece at the moment XD

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    Awesome! I cannot wait to read it, your work is fabulous!

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    Just because Treyu has much to be proud of Treyu has much to be proud of Treyu has much to be proud of Treyu has much to be proud of Treyu has much to be proud of Treyu has much to be proud of Treyu has much to be proud of Treyu has much to be proud of Treyu has much to be proud of Treyu's Avatar
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    Thanks to Viper for finding me the PERFECT Title XD

    -snugs the snakie-

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    Very good. We have another great write among us. Well, it's good to hear some good poems. Very well writen
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    Your very welcome Treyu, and a matter of fact you inspired me to post one of my own, and thus it been known to one and all, that it has been posted if anyone is interested.

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    I posted another short poem... -toddles off to read Vipers poem-

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    i love this poem, im going to put it on my wall
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    Just because Treyu has much to be proud of Treyu has much to be proud of Treyu has much to be proud of Treyu has much to be proud of Treyu has much to be proud of Treyu has much to be proud of Treyu has much to be proud of Treyu has much to be proud of Treyu has much to be proud of Treyu's Avatar
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    -blushes- Thanks XD

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    I agree with yukari, it's very well written and I liked the details you gave, but in my opinion it partialy sounded like a storyish. Great work and keep writing more, I liked it alot ^ ^

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    Nice poem I give it a thumbs up.
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