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    Post Shout

    I shout your name.
    You just stand there.
    Are you playing some sort of game?
    Or do just not care?

    I shout to him,
    He continues walking.
    What's he plan to win,
    By pretending he's talking?

    I walk up to you,
    Ask you how you are..
    You look at me like you never knew,
    Who I am, and get in your car.

    I call your cell,
    You don't answer.
    I thought "Am I in hell?"..
    "If not, then why won't he answer?".

    Such friends we were,
    Yet you don't hear me..
    Then I saw her.

    You put me on silence,
    And locked me out..
    To let her in since,
    I made you want to shout..

    Yet, lovers agree to disagree,
    Like you and me,
    but you and her disagree to agree.
    ...How could this be?


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    I like how it rhymes, but some of the parts got me confused, but it's okay ^ ^ it was good in the end anyway. Keep it up.
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    Default Carrie?????!

    are you carrie white of BMS
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    a few bits, i think, were a little forced with rhyming, otherwise it was well written. the rhyming was also good except for a few parts. hope to see more writing from you <3
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    Default my bad

    sorry for the mix-up. it seems like something she'd write. it's pretty nice
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    It's a nice poem. It has a rhyme to it also. I like the flow. Keep it up.


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