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    Default A Remark's Situation

    ok i was just experimenting with this poem, check out my other poem ECHO! ECHO! Rewind~*GLiCh~gLIcH~

    A Remark's Situation

    foolishness,
    like getting brutally clubbed,
    with a baseball bat,
    right in the lower back,
    the center of your spine,
    like getting whipped,
    about a bazillion times,
    but your used to it,
    so you let it manipulate,
    to tire you out emotionally,
    your eyes need to shut though,
    you desprately need a nap,
    a time to rejuvenate self esteem,
    then to perkishly wake up,
    rise and shine to another horrid!
    but prepared and ready,
    to out do foolish traps today,
    with a triumphet losing streak,
    but in remark's situations,
    of winning acknowledging wisdom~
    Last edited by Aleyna; 06-27-2006 at 02:57 PM.

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    that was a pretty poem good job!

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    Sad and wicked at the same time. Very well writen Another great poem
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    thanx u guys

    i wrote that poem a long time ago, but i really appreciate people finally commenting on it ^-^

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    Good job with the choice of words, but where did your flow go?

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    well around the time era wen i was writing this poem i was experimenting and looking for other ways of being creative

    basically i was trying new ways to write poems
    this was just sort of wut i call a practice poem i wrote that i thought was cute, not my best i can sure say that but certainly a good practice

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    Was this from the perspective of a baby seal?
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    that was a sad poem, but i think you did a good job it was very well written.

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    nice one
    life is a party. the music's bad, someone spiked the punch, and the afterparty is in the ground

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