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    hey ppl i just wrote something now recently hope ya enjoy it. this is the first time for me to write in this catigory so im a bet nervous. so pweez read and hopfully enjoy.

    Loved now and forever

    he brushed me to his body sweetly
    then he took my hand delicatly
    our eyes mett and i was red as a rose
    smiling at me like an opeining cherryblosome
    his greeish-bluish eyes were not common
    slowly in embrace i was melting
    when he talked i heard birds singing
    we danced and danced for hours
    no music, but the sound steps of ours
    then swiftly he held with his hand my chin
    all of a sudden to his face was coming a grin
    he leand close for a kiss
    i closed my eyes,i heard the wind hiss
    in his kiss like no other i felt passion
    i felt as if on earth had descendd heaven
    i felt like a princess and i was rescued from the tower
    a shooting star passed and i wished this moment would go slower
    then he stoped and said we now sit
    we sat and now low lights was lit
    we were togther sitting under the stars
    i wished we could go alone to Mars
    both his arms wraped around me like a child
    from the inside my heart now pounding wild
    he stroked my hair 'till i went to sleep
    from happiness my heart now wanted to leap
    i had the most beautiful dream ever
    it was stuck in my head on a plate of silver
    i dreamed he took me to Mars alone
    for the rest of my life i didnt want to mone
    to have him i was the luckyest girl on earth
    to lose him that to me would be great loath
    that was the first and last love of my life

    well thnx for ya time and i hope ya enjoyed leave me a comment and tell me how it is ^^ thnx again lol
    Last edited by cherryblosmes; 07-07-2006 at 09:29 PM. Reason: fixing typos and stuff
    *lost in the world of broken and dead hearts,
    traped in the mist of ones who lied,
    confused by how foolish i am ,
    wanting to disappear in my world alone with ones who care for me,
    is that forbidden to ask that-tell me someone*





    sig by Nespa thank u so much ur awsome !!! lol ^.^
    the famous Crimson Soul the best stalker ever

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    O___o well done, i have to say it seems a little forced with being rhymed.. but you know, i am a perfectionist so no its ok. lol, it is good, you should keep writing and getting better as you go. >>>
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    It's nice, but maybe you should fix up your spelling mistakes. It makes a big difference, and it also makes it easier to read.

    All in all though, I think it's lovely. Good work!


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    yeah sorry i'll fix those it does change the meaning sorry ^^; thnx though
    *lost in the world of broken and dead hearts,
    traped in the mist of ones who lied,
    confused by how foolish i am ,
    wanting to disappear in my world alone with ones who care for me,
    is that forbidden to ask that-tell me someone*





    sig by Nespa thank u so much ur awsome !!! lol ^.^
    the famous Crimson Soul the best stalker ever

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    I love your poem.
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    its all fixed now hopfully there isnt anymore typos sorry about that. lol *rubs the back of her head embaressed*
    *lost in the world of broken and dead hearts,
    traped in the mist of ones who lied,
    confused by how foolish i am ,
    wanting to disappear in my world alone with ones who care for me,
    is that forbidden to ask that-tell me someone*





    sig by Nespa thank u so much ur awsome !!! lol ^.^
    the famous Crimson Soul the best stalker ever

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