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    Touch me lightly


    Touch me lightly
    A gentle gasp escapes my mouth
    The corners upturned into a soft smile
    I feel your hand hovering before me
    Touch me lightly-I say. I yearn
    You don’t-of course
    Your hand strays from me, returning to you
    I feel cold-dark. Dead.
    My eyes stop their focus,
    Remaining silent their yearn-still existent.
    My eyes eventually stray to meet your own,
    You seem puzzled, ashamed, distant.
    I outstretch my palm,
    it turned upwards, awaiting your hand.
    You dare not touch it, your eyes show slight remorse.
    As you move away slowly,
    I feel my heart shrivel up and die,
    Like a rose, repenting its choice to bloom to its full splendour.
    You turn away-completely.
    Your back facing me, my heart feeling a gentle sting.
    I sigh, a soft sigh.
    Not loud enough to catch your attention-to make you turn back.
    But loud enough to stir the smallest of creatures.
    Touch me lightly-I wish.
    I ask.
    I plead.
    But you are gone.


    ~Seldy
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    *claps* that was a sweet poem!^_~

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    Wow. Your a great poet. Better than me. lol ^ ^
    Your poem is nice. It has a great flow. It's nice to read this poem.


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    oh yes, i agree with sarara, indeed a good poem. You use such words that interpret more meaning. good job. keep on writing. XD
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    O.o;; I got replies?*Gasps* xD Thankyou all <3

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    Nice poem good job.
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