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    Default I Wait For You

    I sit on the edge of a cliff,
    Starring at the sunset.
    I wait for you my beloved,
    After all my love for you is already set.

    I wait for your return,
    But this process is really lonely.
    Oh well when you return and I see your face,
    Oh you won't believe on how I feel so happy.

    When we finally meet,
    I hope your love is true like mine.
    I'll propose to you when the time is right,
    That moment will be so divine.

    I await... I await...
    I await for you my beloved.
    Until then I'm all alone,
    With no happiness to be shown.

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    I'll wait for you Sailor Lunar Eclipse.
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    It's a pretty good poem. I like it...but it'll be close unless you change the title to "Poem: I wait for you" HURRY before it's closed! >>;



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    Congrates it didn't get closed, but your poem shure is cute!!!.....O o! I said that again, anyways great job, but on the first one there was like little flow in it. The rest is alright. Keep them coming, I want to see more.

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    i really like the 1st stanza when you said you were waiting on the thread, a good start off for your poem

    lol if u get married to michelene im so coming to the wedding

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    Wow... another poem for me...
    You make me feel so special.
    I really like the poem. I love the sound of it and how it all fits together. It's really good! Wow is almost all I can say!

    And I'm going to ignore the marriage comment... ALANNAH!


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    You are special, in my eyes and heart. I don't know what others think about you though.
    "As the blood starts to boil, the flow of crimson splendor will act like a flood" ~R

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    very heart warming and very touching. If my friend where to read this she would be crying I bet lol. Please make more I like these

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