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    Default Death to Life

    Death to Life
    In this plane of death and despair

    One would wonder if anyone would care

    If one would even dare

    To search through my soul with me

    To hear my one and only plea

    Take me away oh darkness

    Fill me with emptiness

    Take me into a world of sweet bliss

    And I shall seal it with one final kiss

    But unless the world of light may come

    And light will appear to have surly won

    Release me oh darkness

    Let me feel the warmth of day once more

    Freed from a land of blood and gore

    Where there is peace and no more war

    May my wings let me sore

    Allow me to go to my love

    May the winds carry me to her

    My sweet love the only one that will truly comfort me

    But if only…..if only I could find my love

    But when I find her

    On that day I will be truly happy

    But until that day I will search and won’t stop till I find my love

    For I cherish her more than anyone would a sweet turtle dove
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    Senior Member Aleyna has a reputation beyond repute Aleyna has a reputation beyond repute Aleyna has a reputation beyond repute Aleyna has a reputation beyond repute Aleyna has a reputation beyond repute Aleyna has a reputation beyond repute Aleyna has a reputation beyond repute Aleyna has a reputation beyond repute Aleyna has a reputation beyond repute Aleyna has a reputation beyond repute Aleyna has a reputation beyond repute Aleyna's Avatar
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    i love how you tell this as if it was a story

    you r good at writing poetry

    the last line was the best

    keep writing more!!!

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    That was a very insightful poem, you are very talented with forming your poetry, I really enjoyed reading that, I look forward to reading more of your poetry, and great job on the poem! Keep up the good work! ^^

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    That Was Great And Awsome The Way U Made It Perfect And Fit For A Story That War Really Good. Keep Writing And Posting Id Love To Read More Or Ur Writings. And The Way U Made The Image About The Differance From Light And Darkness And How Bad U Wanted To Go To Ur Beloved One. That Was Awsome ^.^
    *lost in the world of broken and dead hearts,
    traped in the mist of ones who lied,
    confused by how foolish i am ,
    wanting to disappear in my world alone with ones who care for me,
    is that forbidden to ask that-tell me someone*





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    wow that's so cool ^.^!!!!!! hey it's like me lol well cept ffor the whole love stuff ^.^;;;

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    That was really deep!! keep writting but post more!!

    Thanks BD15...you rule!!!

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