mistakes

[LittleMomo]

I'm sorry for my mistakes,
I'm sorry for everything I do.
I don't care what it takes,
just tell me you care too.

I cry for you,
as I beg on the floor,
laying there blue,
when you go to the door.

I stood up crying,
you held back,
you said I'm lying,
then you began to attack.

Using a knife,
you killed me,
taking my life,
you let me be....
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^ ^ I seem to be rhyming today, but kinda sad today...

[wolf-on-the-hunt]

awww im sorry luck........

[Taking_Lifes]

awwww... thats so sad.
but i like ur poem.
keep up the good work

[LittleMomo]

I'm happy again, so I made another poem!

[Cat_Demon]

i like it jump, i shall wait for more

[Sakura Holic]

Good poem Lucky! I really liked it. And Im glad your happy again. ^ ^

[Saisashi~Arashi]

Cool poem. I like it.

[Fetal Fetish]

I love the poem! I hope you keep writing more!

[Luck_Sharingan_Sakura]

I like it Lucky! I hope you keep making more! -^_^-

[Aminity]

Good poem as always.
Wouldn't expect anything less.