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    Default Welcome From the Twilight

    This is my second poem and is a little better than my first (My Prison in the Mirror). The last line has a direct reference to my user name if you know what my User name means...

    Welcome From the Twilight

    Welcome to the Night
    Welcome to the Stars
    Welcome to the splendor
    Of the darkness forever more


    Welcome from the Nightingale
    Welcome from the clouds
    Welcome from the Black Leaves
    That give you peace unparalleled


    Welcome for the Moon to rise
    Welcome for the Flies to glow
    Welcome for the Black Velvet Curtain
    To encompass the world in its loving bow


    Carved with the many stars
    That decorate the skies so blue
    This sorrowed Sun is what the
    Owl once again did slew


    Sent from the darkest depths
    Of the Raven’s peaceful slumber
    The Snake rests with the Rabbit
    In Silence oh so sweet and oh so somber


    Scattered from the Abyss
    and trembling with Pain, dismissed
    The Night transcends the Loving Dance
    Of the Garish Light and the Burning Sun


    The Moon gives you the Guidance
    Of which you do not need
    For the Night brings Peace
    From the deepest Pits of Hell
    And the highest reaches of Heaven


    Sacred is the Glowing Moon
    Sacred are the Stars
    Sacred is the Cradling Swoon
    Of which begs for your daily Scars


    Rest with the Raven
    Rest with the Snake
    Rest with the Rabbit
    And for the Pain reeled in for the Rake
    Made for the Leaves and the Grasses
    Now Bathed in the Eternal Blanket
    Of the pained Rains from Heaven


    Now sleep you who are so troubled
    Sleep for you are at Peace
    And your Sorrows are far from Doubled
    Sleep for your Soul is Halved
    Halved so you cannot feel the Pain of Day


    Goodnight from the Twilight’s Goddess…



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    If you read it tell me what you think!! BTW, as far as my user name, Yugure means Twilight.... This poem is sorta of like something you might read or at least think of before you go sleep. Well... just tell if I need some work or am I good! ^_^
    Last edited by Fabala; 07-18-2008 at 09:41 PM.
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    hey i liked the part with the nightingale but i wouldv'e said sumthing bout the lark going along with that

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    I have to say, that is a pritty good poem you got there keep up the good work.

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    Thank you both very much! I tried my best and I'm quite surprised and rather proud of myself! tee hee! Go me!

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    OMGosh......this is [bootifull] hope ta see more!
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