fear

[skater2791]

fear, what is fear
a feeling of torture
a feeling of death
a feeling of pain
a feeling of anger

there is another feeling
quite similar as you will see
a feeling supposively better
but decieving, ever so decieving

it is the feeling of love
the love that brings u torture
brings u death
brings u pain
brings u anger

so why do we love
why do we fear
it all comes from the same place
the heart, the ever beating heart
the yelling, screaming, bleeding, tortured heart

so what do we do
but mourn over the loss
of those that fall victim
to the blow of these feelings
suicide, the effect of this evil cause

we can do nothing but wait
wait for the same sick fate to happen to us
whether it be love or fear
or both at once

skater

[YaiiShi°]

Great poem, it's so beautiful.. ^^

[♥Sakura♥]

Nice poem, I like.... very good.

[Kittyninjamewmew]

whoa that wuz a great poem

[skater2791]

thank uuuu

[Genghis Beatrix]

deep...
the second poem that I've read with so much pain!

[Skyla_G]

I agree with beatrix bunny... it seems very painful. It's very impacting too. I like how you chose fear and love... it's like light and dark.

It makes me think... fear of that loved one is like our sole protection. But in itself is love aswell. *reads again* To think that fear doesnt decieve us, being as it's a protection, yet love will decieve since its something we[I] have yet to comprehend.

And the second last verse is the most impacting... it's like where the rest of the poem is centered towards. Is the loss that we mourn a physical suicide or something else?

I was discussing with a friend about 'waiting', and we came to the conclusion that it has a similar trait as 'encouragement'. That you can only wait so long[be encouraged so far] that you have to use your freewill before anything will actually happen... I think I'm rambling now so in the meantime keep up the awesome work and dont give up!

[Breibhinn]

I love your poem, it is so deep and beautiful. I would love to see more from you. ^_^

[Water Wolf]

all i can say is;

WOW!

WOW!

WOW!

[skater2791]

thank u guys....ill think of more

[zappa_demon]

nice poem ill come to see here more often

[zappa_demon]

ohh i got a poem
-if you have the power dont kill the bug free the bug and the goodnesse will free you

[Heartless Soul Eater]

great great great

[zappa_demon]

my new poem
-music is hapyness music is fear music is rage but what are you

[Skyla_G]

Dude. Open your own thread... ^.~

[YoKu]

WOW, that was awsome!! Very expressive and emotional!!