as I cry in vain

[LittleMomo]

Tears run down my cheeks,
as I see the chaos,
around me, and I,
can't feel anything,
as if I was dead already,
things can't go back,
as my life has been struck,
by lightning and darkness,
I stand in the shadows,
as I grow weak,
there's no escape,
because I'm stuck there,
I get pain and sorrow,
as I weep in the dark,
no one notices me,
no one wants to pick me up,
when I'm completely down,
so I'll just wait,
either until my life has ended,
or an angel helps me up....
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^-^ Have fun reading!

[suky]

Hope that you can get better!!! Don't forget that you can talk to me about it if you wish and I know lots and lots of friends will be there for you!!!!, cuz I am one of them!!!!!, It's a sad poem so not really that much enjoyable!, but very sad and sensativeness is found in this poem. It's great! and keep it up, but no more sad ones please!!!

[LittleMomo]

I'll try not to, it's hard to not make sad poems. ^-^ I'll do my best not to make anymore! Another poem coming soon!

[Lilium Filix]

Hmmm.....this poem makes me think of heartbreak. O.o
Beautifully written though.

~The Angel has spoken~
~AEK~

[furuba4ever]

very sad, but beautiful at the same time, but I really like this poem all the same.