You are

[Vendetta]

You are an angel,

It’s so easy to tell,

You are my teddy,

Whom I bring to beddy,

You are my love,

Sent from above,

You save me,

And help me to see.



I love you for this,

I await your kiss,

I need you,

I want you.



You will never let me cry,

Or even see a tear in my eye,

You know all the rest,

For me, you are best

You help me through hard times,

This is why I make these rhymes,

Words will never show how I feal,

You’ll never know ‘till we kiss for real.



I love you for this,

I await your kiss,

I want you,

I need you,

This is all I can do,

You show my love for you.

Any tips? Please please post! Thank you for reading!

[LittleMomo]

AWWWWW! That's oh so sweet for a poem! I love it! Keep it up! ^-^ Like your poems much

[Vendetta]

Thank You!!! Your so Nice!!

[Kagekotsu]

Your poem was so sweet, I really liked it. You really know how to write a poem ^^ Keep on writing them, okay? ^^

[Vendetta]

I forgot to say, This is ANOTHER poem that was made for my perfect Angel!

[sumomo cute]

>.< So totally sweet!!! omg I love that poem! Awesome awesome!! ^_^

[suky]

So how my brain doesn't comprehend how you can come up with this so way beyond what words can say poems? I think I know, cuz your just so awsome it's really beutiful so keep it up!!!!

[Vendetta]

*smiles* Thanks Suky... It isn't hard to make peotry or anything, I just express how I feel better this way.

[Daenerys]

Guys, please read the RULES.

I haven't read a single reply that has followed the rules in this thread. I will start deleting them.

[Vendetta]

Guys, please read the RULES.

I haven't read a single reply that has followed the rules in this thread. I will start deleting them.

I have already read the rules, and we are suppose to make non-spammy posts...But, d you honestly expect everyone to do that? I mean, what do you say about a poem? Point out the errors, then what? After everything is fixed, and if you really like it, all you can say is that you think the poem is awsome... Well, if this is how things are now, no one can post a 'correct' post anymore, I'll just stop posting my poetry.....