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    Default Casual Fuu

    Hmmm.... Wallpaper of Fuu from Magic Knight Rayearth; not really too sure how I feel about the outcome, but please give me some tips on how to make it better.
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    It's too flat and regular. The bricks on the background repeat, and are softer than the 'negative' pasted onto them. The character looks like she's a decal pasted onto the wall, and she appears to be pushed off to the side - she doesn't have enough presence.

    Try doing something less regular and more visually interesting with the background. Tilt it, for starters? And do more to draw more attention to the character.

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    You know, the cut seems a bit sloppy...

    And never have a large repeat sequence in a wallpaper... it gets uninteresting.

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    You need to work more on the cutting of the stock and improving the quality of the stock. ^_^ and the background seems a bit plainand the stock doesn't stand out very much. But there's always room for improvement.




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