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    Default First 3D attempt. *minor content warning*

    Before I begin...The image I used was from a Doujin cover, so I only used the laughing man logo to censor Tsunades nipples (thats all that was showing, don't worry the rest is clean...and I was too lazy to edit over them >_>)
    I just got Bryce the other day, and after spending some time on tutorial sites and messing around in the program, I think I have the basics down now. I used PS to highten the 3D renders.
    Crituqes welcome.

    Keep in mind...This is my first time rendering 3D things, as basic as they are, So I "Might" have went a little crazy with it >_>

    Oh, and if you want the not....laughing man version, PM me.
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    I think the use of the Laughing Man logo is hilarious.

    Pretty background, and nice composition to the image.

    The filmstrip at left is covered slightly by the background, and that looks wrong, especially since the highlighting around the black makes it look like the filmstrip has some substance to it. I recommend turning off the transparency on the filmstrip.

    The woman's arms and head are a little washed out against the background, and she's not as sharp as the background, which makes her a little bit lost against it. I recommend sharpening her just a bit and turning up the contrast and/or saturation slightly to draw more attention to her.

    The text is almost completely lost against the background. Maybe make it somewhat larger, or bold? Just make sure the text doesn't draw too much attention to itself.

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    Ok, Made some changes (i made this wallpaper between 12 and night and 5 in the morning, I was coherent >_>)

    I took the filmstrip out, I just put it there to try something new..failed >_>
    I was just looking for something to Fill up some space, but I like it better with the film strip gone completly.

    I also made Tsunade a bit brighter to fix the arm/head problem you mentioned(which I saw now that i'm awake^^)

    As for the Text...I need it small and un-noticable. Call it a pet peeve. When I make text on wallpapers, I've come to get myself used to "Small, un-noticable...but it IS there"
    I can't stand noticable text on my wallpapers, But I still want it to be there (see, weird).
    Same with my signature, it's always white text with black stroke.
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    I can't really effectlvely critique it since I wouldn't really know what I was talking about. But from a normal, non photoshop, guy it looks really impressive. all the 3D effects are really nice touches and the tsunade render is really nice. The Laughing man logo is also very funny >.>

    But I also think there's too much stuff going on in it, like you said, you went crazy with those 3d whatchamacallits. There's too much going on in the background that distracts from Tsunade, and I suspect it could give someone a headache if they looked long enough. But other then that it's really quite good.
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    The woman, especially her head and arms, are still too soft and muted against the vibrant background; the eye is drawn away from her. Try increasing the saturation and/or sharpness on the woman, and making the background somewhat less vivid, to bring her out more.

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    Well, yes, the woman's head and arms aren't sharp enough; they merge with the background in a not-very-good way as the color of the arms and background are opposite. The text above isn't visible enough. The 3D whatchamacallits are...(how can i make some too?)... a tad too many, but way cool! The wallpaper itself... i think it's too bright. You'll need to lower down a bit of brightness and sharpen it up abit, unless you intended for it to be bright. The Laughing man logo.... isn't really that funny, but, it works just fine, i guess.
    Nice job, in any case ^^

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    I've decided to quit on the wallpaper, as it was a failed first attempt and the stock in general was too bright to begin with.

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    Don't give up so easily! I liked the concept.

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    Why the laughing man logo's? You need to replace them with dancing Girls Gone Wild DvD's, and big flashing text saying, "BUY NOW."

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ch33zyph33r
    Why the laughing man logo's? You need to replace them with dancing Girls Gone Wild DvD's, and big flashing text saying, "BUY NOW."

    That's my two cents.
    Because, Like nipples, the laughing man logo is round in shape. Also, it was sitting on my desktop doing nothing, I felt the need to use it.
    Other than that...Black bars are over-rated =O

    I did change the levels, and it looks a bit darker. But i'm still not satisfied. I'll post more wallpapers later with..what I at least think, better 3-D.

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