Mira Kaiba's Gallery of Pictures

[tiv]

here's your gallery. ^_^;

[Mira Kaiba]

Thanks. Heres one of my first pics. It's the first time I've EVER used color, so I know it needs work. If you guys can critique, that'd be great! I think the head might be a bit to big, but I'm not sure...
Here's what it looked like not on the computer, but before I scanned it in. My scanner is kinds wacked out, so I lose some of the quality and shading and stuff when I scan them in. Sorry about the shading, the scanner didn't get any of it... I don't think it was dark enough, just to let you all know that its there.

[animeglobe]

thats a good picture. just work on the body a lil bit more then you will be good.

[tiv]

-----i took the old thread down that you'd first put up, i hope that's all right.

[Mira Kaiba]

Please disregard this post.

[Mira Kaiba]

Heres a couple other pics I did. The second one isn't finished though. The first guy where you can only see his face is the first anime I ever did, so Inknow it's not that great... How do you guys think I can make the second guy better? I'm kinda stuck on him. A lot of the shading and finer lines got messed up again, sorry, but my scanner's not the best.

[Mira Kaiba]

Here's some of my newer art. I hope the ink in my Megaman character is better than some of the other inking I've done. Please Critique! I can't get better unless you tell me what to do better.

[Mira Kaiba]

Sorry, I hate to double post, but no one else has posted. Please review my art? Please... I have a new one...

[Marie2007]

great work

[Mira Kaiba]

Thank you! A review!

[Mira Kaiba]

Keep on critiquing! Here's another one...

[Mira Kaiba]

Here's one of Marik from Yugioh. I think his face might be kind of... chubby.

[kingkostas]

Every picture you do is better and better...you are very good....

• About the color: 1st BECAREFUl the color must not pass the lines...2nd to make the white glow in the hair part use the polygon lasso(photoshop if you have)..3rd to ake shadows press the pick color tool then press to the color that you want to create shadow..then take polygon lasso and mark the region that you want to have the shadow..(trust me this helps of course if you have photoshop)....
• About the face: I suggest you to make a complex of lines..like this i have attach here....

That's what i have to say....you must know that you are very very good...
Sorry for mae an attachment to your gallery but i would like to show you an example....be good and....i know you will get better and better....

[-Kaoru-]

Oh nice job!

[Mira Kaiba]

Thanks guys. Thanks kingkostas. That helps. I do have photoshop, but I've never used the lasso tool that way. Ill work on it. It's kinda hard cause I have to draw them by hand and then color them on the computer, so it takes me forever to color them cause the fill bucket wont work. Do you have any tips to make the coloring part go better?
Please keep up the reviews!!! I LOVE them!! And I reeeaaaally need the help, as you all can see. PLEASE HELP by reviewing!!!
Thanks!

[Ωmega]

ill give some advice form artist to artist.
your work is good and original,but you really need to pay close attention to your proportions,perseption,and the use of space and stance.
for example: the picture you did of the elf angel...it looks like hes leaning over.
the last pic you posted has a very chubby face (unless thats what you were going for)
the eyes tend to be a little off on some,etc.
i suggest lightly sketching the pic in basic shapes first,and then add details and curves over those shapes (as guidelines in a sense...)
keep drawning!!!

[kingkostas]

the only thing you need is to clean your drawings...then you can color them...
that's a usual problem when you gonna color scan pictures....
1st: PHOTOSHOP: pick up the magic wand tool...and put inside a region...the magic wand will mark automaticaly a whole area around the black lines....then if you press delete..the marked area will be clear and ready for PAINT BUCKET
2nd: The whole of my drawings tha i have in my gallery are all paint and sketched by computer with the mouse.....when i draw with my hand ( of course better pictures ) i first draw with a soft pencil....anyway whatever pencil and then i use a (Faber-castel finepen....this make nice black lines) so i redraw the pencil picture with this finepen and when i am finished i pick up my eraser and clean all the pencil lines...all the paper...so the only thing left in the paper is the black line from the finepen...then if you scan it ...you can color it without clean it

i hope i helped you enough ....see ya and wating for new pictures...

[Mira Kaiba]

Thanks for the help, guys. Here you go. Tell me what u think of the Dark Magician Girl. I colored her in photoshop 2.0, so its not really that good. Please review! I appreciate all critiques and criticisms!


P.S. If anyone thinks that i should make the Dark Magician Girl Pic bigger, i can. just tell me. THANX!

[souske]

Hey those pictures are really good and a little bit better than mine. Maybe you should help me make an anime that I'm making with my friends

[kingkostas]

hey long time no see mira....Your new picture is nice. And her eyes are wonderfull keep drawing...

[KiteX]

All those pics are good but can be improved.Keep trying though!

[-Kaoru-]

Very nice work Mira!

[KiteX]

I agree...(again)

[Mira Kaiba]

Thanks for the critiques, everyone! Hello. Me again! I have a new pic. However, my scanner is pretty bad, so you can't really see the shading that I put on his that well. What do you guys think? Please review. I need help improving my drawings!

[KiteX]

Hello. Me again! I have a new pic. However, my scanner is pretty bad, so you can't really see the shading that I put on his that well. What do you guys think? PLEASE review? I need help improving my drawings!

Thats really good.Keep the good work up.