Something doesn't seem right,
Might be the smell of decay.
Sun's starting to shine,
People awake to the day.
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Hmm that was hot. Simple but good. Atleast you didn't make 3458976 spelling errors. ;D
I don't really understand what the message is.:\
its good, i dont see many people write poems on here.
Death is near.
It was good but it was very short.
Short and shweet =D (no errors... so it didnt' make very much of a difference this time =D) Pretty good ^^;
Last edited by Nerveya; 07-08-2005 at 01:12 PM.
great poem Ai keep it up
Sometimes The Minute You Give Up On Everything Somebody Shows Up And Cheers You Up Right Before Your Very Eyes It Happened To Me And He Knows Who He Is I Hope.
Sounds good; short and sweet. Plus, as Naokomi mentioned before, you didn't make *insert seven digit number here* typos.
Keep the great work up!
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