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No! Curse of the un-ending ending!
That Made No Sense! If she's like betroathed how can she not see him again!?!
Last edited by Rageling; 03-27-2006 at 01:21 AM. Reason: Just noticing that a friend who knew my password hated Hamtaro
Lady Ai, eh..(can I call u that?) anyway, i hate stories with endings that dont end, then again i do , it gives a sense that u want to read on, and then again, you may just want to make up an ending... It's awesome!!
There is an ending. I said Fin.
Anyway, it's supposed to make you think. Did he get killed? Did she die? Did thier parents break the agreement... did she not see him as the same person that she once did when she was younger, did he change when he grew up...
So many things to think.
Almost. Mine has more crack in it. >)
My own belief is that "she never saw the boy again" because he turned into a GIRL (or WOMAN, rather). And his vow in life was to become her rival (ie: steal her boyfriends, get the starring role in school plays, become the teacher's pet, etc.), since she was so mean to him all those years ago and just stared at him, from behind that apron, as though he were some sort of freak. Of course the "apron girl" never knows that her rival is the boy she loved long ago, but her rival uses the "apron girl"s feelings (her hatred, her love for the boy) to her advantage. u_u
And then at some point in the story, they get drafted in a war. That involves fighting robots made of beer cans and butter. u_u
I dare someone to turn that into an actual story. I'm crazy enough to try and do it...but I challenge SOMEONE ELSE to try it as well. >.>
Last edited by bri_hime7; 02-23-2008 at 10:08 PM.
Well...a year and three-ish months ;p But I'll let you off. Still want more to the ending, though!
Wow. No offense, but seem to specialize in these little odd shorts. If only I could get six posts for a response. ;_; *goes off to rant in journal... again*
It was short, but it did leave room for bunches of thinking.
Anyone can take that and go in a billion directions. The boy could have been abducted by aliens for all we know.
I like it; good job, as usual, Ai.
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wow i never see u post ur poems in here! anyways its nice too bad its fiction. keep it up
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It's interesting. It's been five seconds since I finished and already I have...-.Counts.- Oh, say...ten questions and answers to what happened to him. Here's one:
Q: Maybe something happened to the girl?
A: Yeah! She may have suddenly warped into a different dimension where everything is the same, but the boy and his father never existed!
=D Am I smart, or what?
Hey I really like your work! Like this one it makes you think of what might have happened and why she never saw him again! Its really nice!
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That was... interesting. Maybe the mum just said that because... she wanted the girl to get over her shyness, the message being "You never know who you'll meet".
That would make a cool story! Do it, do it! Quick! Before someone steals the idea! >_>Originally Posted by Princess Ai
Not to be off topic, but you have a copyright? Does that happen once you start to write the story, or once you finish it?
Aww, I really like it Lady Ai ^_^. Very nicely written! At first glance your like what about the ending? What happened to him? But then, like you said, you start to think what could have happened between them all... It gets your imagination start running. Anyways I really like it again! A+!
Wow, I enjoyed this story! ^^
It really made me think...
I wish I knew what became of the girl and the boy though.. TT.TT
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