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    Default Original Fiction: Once Upon an Apron (Short Story)

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    No! Curse of the un-ending ending!

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    That Made No Sense! If she's like betroathed how can she not see him again!?!






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    Lady Ai, eh..(can I call u that?) anyway, i hate stories with endings that dont end, then again i do , it gives a sense that u want to read on, and then again, you may just want to make up an ending... It's awesome!!
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    There is an ending. I said Fin.

    Anyway, it's supposed to make you think. Did he get killed? Did she die? Did thier parents break the agreement... did she not see him as the same person that she once did when she was younger, did he change when he grew up...

    So many things to think.
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    Last post was 2 years ago. I think it's okay to bump this. =)
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    Well...a year and three-ish months ;p But I'll let you off. Still want more to the ending, though!

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    Wow. No offense, but seem to specialize in these little odd shorts. If only I could get six posts for a response. ;_; *goes off to rant in journal... again*

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    Well, usually when I write a long story, I don't post it until it's done. Unless I really want opinions on it.

    I remember posting the short stories because all the stories people WERE posting, were GOD AWFUL.
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    It was short, but it did leave room for bunches of thinking.

    Anyone can take that and go in a billion directions. The boy could have been abducted by aliens for all we know.

    I like it; good job, as usual, Ai.
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    wow i never see u post ur poems in here! anyways its nice too bad its fiction. keep it up
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    Wink I like it a lot!

    It's interesting. It's been five seconds since I finished and already I have...-.Counts.- Oh, say...ten questions and answers to what happened to him. Here's one:
    Q: Maybe something happened to the girl?
    A: Yeah! She may have suddenly warped into a different dimension where everything is the same, but the boy and his father never existed!
    =D Am I smart, or what?

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    Perhaps the boy or the girl was sucked into another one of Ai's stories!

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    OH MY GOD! I want to put one of them in another story now. xD
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    Hey I really like your work! Like this one it makes you think of what might have happened and why she never saw him again! Its really nice!

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    That was... interesting. Maybe the mum just said that because... she wanted the girl to get over her shyness, the message being "You never know who you'll meet".


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    Quote Originally Posted by Princess Ai
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    OH MY GOD! I want to put one of them in another story now. xD
    That would make a cool story! Do it, do it! Quick! Before someone steals the idea! >_>

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    O_o someone can't steal my characters and put them in a story. It's an infridgement on my copyright.
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    Not to be off topic, but you have a copyright? Does that happen once you start to write the story, or once you finish it?

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    Aww, I really like it Lady Ai ^_^. Very nicely written! At first glance your like what about the ending? What happened to him? But then, like you said, you start to think what could have happened between them all... It gets your imagination start running. Anyways I really like it again! A+!
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    Wow, I enjoyed this story! ^^
    It really made me think...
    I wish I knew what became of the girl and the boy though.. TT.TT

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sayoko
    Not to be off topic, but you have a copyright? Does that happen once you start to write the story, or once you finish it?
    Now a days, whenever you post something to the internet and it's dated, it's copyrighted.
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    Ah, thank you.
    It's been three months or so later, and the questions about the story are still in my head. It's that good of a short story!

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