Naru Nanao

**EternalBlue** · 12-02-2004 06:54 PM

Hehe it's been a while since I've had the time to work on a wall. This one's pretty basic, I think I'll have to work on the trees in the background a bit still.(Change em into different trees mainly :P and add some texture to them) Aside from that, anything else?

**acamori** · 12-02-2004 07:03 PM

heya blue boi. nice wall, but i'm not sure about the trees, the bark on the front one seems furry which most arent, and the ones in the back seem flat without some sort of texture (the trunks anyways) the leaves are alright, and the grass is great. other than that, my only thought is that the wall seems too empty, maybe make the chara bigger or something to add more to the foreground

**gadgetgirl16** · 12-02-2004 07:54 PM

i agree with acamori, for the trees....hmmmm so ur serching for ideas....i think u should add butterflys, birds and leaves......idk its just an idea....

**EternalBlue** · 12-02-2004 11:44 PM

Hmm how's this?

Fixed the "furriness".
Added some texture to the background trunks.
Butterflies (obviously XD) not sure if they fit though.
Text, also not sure if it fits.

**Alyssa** · 12-03-2004 02:04 AM

Wow - I like your ideas by far. I dunno though, was wondering, is the grass supposed to appear that blurry? Otherwise, I don't see much of any problems at all. You did great - even your first wallie looked wonderful, but this one has much more depth. Wicked wallie nonetheless! ^^

**wizz-o-matic** · 12-03-2004 06:08 AM

Nice, the bg looks better now ^_^ just the butterflies are out of place (at least as the look now). For butterflies, maybe go with a softer color (like light yellow, red, green), try with color dynamics (in PS) or maybe keep the default setings. Oh, and maybe make them a bit smaller ^_^

**acamori** · 12-03-2004 06:33 AM

like wizzy said, the butterflies look a bit out of place right now. a different color would make them fit better, instead of neon pink/redish whatever it is. and the trees look much better now.

**MuZ0NaZ** · 12-03-2004 01:33 PM

you should work on the tree texture more and do smth about those butterflies - they just dont fit right now. some lil sparkles around them may look great. i love the lush, soft grass & the colors though >_>

**Himura Enishi** · 12-03-2004 01:33 PM

agree with wiz and acamori, but other than that great job, extraction is flawless

**souichi tsujii** · 12-03-2004 03:45 PM

It looks great; the only thing that bothers me is the glow on the girl. It doesn't fit.

**EternalBlue** · 12-03-2004 05:11 PM

Ok let's try this

**acamori** · 12-03-2004 06:11 PM

better, and glow's not too bad on the character. it might fit better if it were more yellowish then blue though, but i wouldn't worry about it too much. (the trees are nice)