Hm.... (panty shot)

[Essex]

Well... this needs something. What?

**Pantzu shot, panty shot, underwear shot**

**Edit: Made the girls look more coulorfull

[Alyssa]

**Spills over her pop bottle**

Gosh! OMG - I think I better go back to Minitokyo now, thank you very much...

**Runs**

[Zedekiah]

Hva I helvete?!

[TerraN EmpirE]

well for one thing tatsu A Panty warning pooky is going to murder you, when she sees this thread. the one with black hair her legs look too smooth to the point of being plastic cut back on the reflections just a hair other wise it's perfect

[____]

O.O -starts choking on popcorn and does the himlech (sp?) menuver on self. then falls off chair gasping for air while coughing on the ground.-

........................

-dies-




DEAR GOD!!!!!!


just cut back on the highlight.
also the outline around them seems a bit too think. try to make it thinner.

-coughs while still half choking and quickly leaves the room-

X_x X.x Xx; >.<

[Annik]

-nose bleeds-

.....

-sniggers-

Yup. XD Panty Shot.

I think it looks great. :] [it's smooth and I like smooth]

[Essex]

Wasn't sure about the hightlight thing

[escaflownemoon]

I think it doesn't need the tiny blocks on the left side there. I wasn't expecting that kind of panty shot.

[WeyrDragon]

:: coughs ::

the panty shot warning is supposed to be in the title of the thread, due in part to thumbnail viewing, also... i think that deserves an ecchi warning.

otherwise...

:: gets tissue for his nose bleed ::

[Zingo]

Nice Tatsu. Wanna go to Elkjop after school..? Please

And change the thread title, remember to add panty shot in the title

[_hades the wicked]

I think that none of those squares are needed, and also, the rectangles that are on the upper-right corner aren't needed.
Also, the border should be removed.
Maybe make the text less opaque too.
Besides that, looks awesome.

[MistressPookyChan]

read the revision to the rules next time, especially concerning adding a warning in the title of the thread. thanks!

[Xian Pu]

Personally? I think you could do away with the foreground image entirely and leave the girls enlarged and in the background. *shrug*

[shi_amai]

I think I like the one with the outline better. But... I dunno.

Now, I shall be ummm... nevermind. O_O

[Essex]

Well... I tried what DD said and what Xian said, except for opaque(?)... take alook
And sorry for misunderstanding the rules all

**still panty shot on one**

[____]

it looks better.....

-leaves room- the second one (not the edited first one with the panty shot.) for some reason is the one i like better. -shrugs-

Edit: in the second one where it shows only the top half of the chars., they seem to be a bit pixilated. try to fix that up.

[Xian Pu]

I wouldn't say pixelated, I would say that it just needs cleaning up a bit. I like the second one best. The girls are cleaner and crisper. ^_^

BTW, the girl on the right; is it me, or does she look like Sawa? (Kite)

[acamori]

i think the version with the larger picture is a bit better too, though it seems slightly empty in my opinion (though that's just me) and like ____ said, the characters are kinda roug mainly around the edges. try cleaning that up and it'll probably look even better.

[Essex]

Well... fixed it a little, don't quite know what to do with the jagged lines, though

[____]

just try to soften the edges or smudge it. perhaps even blur would work. take your pick.

[ShadowBlade]

um...uh.i...uhh..umm...well.....i never expected to see that on this site....thats a nice picture....uh....i...uh....have to give credit where credit is due.

[_hades the wicked]

Well... I tried what DD said and what Xian said, except for opaque(?)... take alook
And sorry for misunderstanding the rules all

**still panty shot on one**

Less opaque... More transparent...
I like the first of the attachments of this quoted post.

[Essex]

More like this, DD? Made it a little more transparent

*panty panty*

[_hades the wicked]

Mmm... No, I was talking about the shapes and the text. Try to make those more transparent. I think that a 40% opacity for the shapes will do it, and for the text, maybe somewhere around 55... Don't know, experiment and see what happens.

[Essex]

Like this maybe?