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    Default Mechanical Angel

    For some reason, the prose seems to fit this image- a lot. I like the way the BG is simple, but not overly so. It doesn't take away from either the image or the poem. Thoughts?
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    I want to die peacefully in my sleep like my grandfather... not screaming and yelling like the passengers in his car.

    Now this, this I fly with pride.

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    i like it, except one thing. the text seems too sharp, for the wall. it seems like it would look better if it blended into the bg a bit better. good wall though.
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    try moving the text over of "be loved" so the main image won't block it off.

    the girl looks a bit blurry to me. try to clean her up a bit.

    also, it looks like there is still a bit of extraction so try to get rid of that.

    as for the shadows.... try adding more instead of just circles. like, make shadows for the wings.

    can't think of anything else at the moment.
    great job on the wall. ^^

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    I've done what I can with the image itself, any and all suggestions are readily accepted. As for the font, is it better?
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    yes it is better. although.....
    the heart is a little jagged.

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    Hmm, the heart doesn't seem too bad. It looks really good, and I like the words in it. ^_^



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    much better with the text, though i think now that _____ has mentioned it, the shadows could be done a little different..i'm not sure what exactly, try looking for other walls with similar shadows i guess.
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