Let's see now, I started making this wallpaper like 3 months ago , but I stopped because my fall semester clsses were starting and I eventually forgot about the thing. Now 3 months later, I finally finished it.
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Let's see now, I started making this wallpaper like 3 months ago , but I stopped because my fall semester clsses were starting and I eventually forgot about the thing. Now 3 months later, I finally finished it.
Last edited by Wandering_Youth; 11-03-2004 at 10:58 PM.
Wow. I really like this. Good job, my only, and I mean only complaint is the character. While I can't put my finger on what it is exactly; something seems off to me. I especially like the reflection. Good job on that.
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You made Alice way too dark and smooth.. you can't even see her mouth x.x
Good job other than that.
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she does look a bit too smooth. almost kinda like 2D.....sort of.....
over all, you did an excellent job with the wp. great work.
Suz: Can you elaborate a bit more? What do mean she's too smooth and dark?
____: Umm, that's because it's a drawing...
Edit: Nvm, I know what you mean by flat and dark now. Well, the original scan was like that so I can't really do anything about it. I actually dare not try.
Last edited by Wandering_Youth; 11-04-2004 at 12:32 AM.
i think suz means that there is more texture in the back ground then on the girl
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I think it's very nicely done. However, here are my 2 cents.
Remove the grass totally if you can, it's out of place. You've got a moon and a lake and some shadows that resemble mountains. Then you've got grass out of nowhere. Text wise, I think you can just stick to "The enchanted lake" if you wanna take out the grass/earth totally.
I think you need to work more on the water effect. All I see right now are the photoshop filter effect which can be done quite easily. You may have to spend quite some time working on how to improve that water look.
That magical circle that you've got going there is a good idea but it's not complete. Refer to the mistress of magic water ripples http://ningen.nattoli.net/tutorials/...ripple_01.html for some good help
And the text, maybe you might wanna remove the butterflies around the text and put sparkles around it instead? Cause the butterflies seem slightly out of place.
Overall, I think it looks great. Whatever I've commented, it's my point of view. All the best!
I have to agree with asher about the text and the reflection is nice but its more like glass rather than water if that's what you were going for. There should be some ripples. The grass seems ok but somehow the way it was done don't look like there is a lake. But overall, it looks good.
I'd put the sparkles trailing her down all the way to her feet, and the grass does make for a strange shoreline.... Maybe make the grass not so tall and make it matte up to the shore of the lake. Thats the only thing wrong I see with it.
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No, I meant the character. Here is what Alice usually looks like. Compare with the wallpaper.
Last edited by Suzuna; 11-04-2004 at 07:02 PM.
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i love it it looks great to me!!!!!!!
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I think it looks very nice! I'm not really a wallpaper expert, but I think it's great! The reflection is a nice touch. *SMM*
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