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what a lovely and sad poem.......
i loved it very very much AI
Beautiful...it was so sad and yet gave a certain hope. Wow...*sigh* amazing!!
~Amazingly cool cousin~ Flame Demon
yes Ai very lovely poem
really,you need to stop bothering me or the next time you show up with flowers and candy your going to leave with a footprint on your face and flowers in your hand,but i got the candy so good luck and goodbye!
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i liked it id say it fits ur personality no offense...i really thought it was good.
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-heh, the one in the middle is me.
That was great. Honestly, I loved it.
Honey, how you gonna make it on your own? When you wake up in the night,And see the stars just city lights,And you can't find home?
Wuffed it very much ^^
I especially loved lines 8 and 11. The way yo put it, I can imagine the scene of the poem. Makes me think of a very foggy, rainy forest. Great job on the use of imagery and the entire poem in itself.
And I swear Im not saying all this just to get rep. :P
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The imagery was really good. I could really feel the sense of loss and desperation to find someone.
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He pwns your souls!!!
"Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. It is our light, not our darkness, that most frightens us."
- Timo Cruz in "Coach Carter" (2005)
On my opnium, you need to ascend in other questions. The poem is good, and answer is "baby I need you tonight"!
I'm the Man that I still seeking around... all of my life
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