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    Exclamation My Secret (critique wanted.. again XP)

    I did a wallpaper of Suzuna mahself! It's pretty simple... heh. So, any suggestions or is it good as is?
    Title is "My Secret".. In the original image she was holding a notebook really close. She looks like she's hidin somethin.. hehe.

    Edit: Removed text and text bar.. now I feel like all I did was resize an image.. which... yeah. XD
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    very lovely. Nice and simple.

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    I'm not a big fan of really big images but it looks good. Very cleanly done.
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    ah, that is excellent. ^^ i don't see any clashes so far. nice and simple but good work! ^^

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    i agree with the others...nice, simple, nothing to add or change

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    Simple but quite nicely done.
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    very sexy me like

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    I'd also like to add that this seems to be the current wallpaper trend. Simple/large character and natural settings. Lovely!

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    Looks nice ^_^ Nothing to change

    Good job ^_^

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    Thanks! I always feel like there's something wrong with stuff I make though.. that's why I like other people to make it for me XD
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    Clean and Simple...I really like it. Great job!
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    I don't like the top faded bar it sorta looks weird on top like that..like its pushing on her head or something..I think if you move it somewhere else or remove it. I think it would look nicer as one big picture. Other than that everything is in good quality. ^^ Great Job.

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    Ok, I removed the text and text bar. No combination of cropping/resizing made space for it. How is it now? Better, worse?
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    I know, you just like cute girls.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Suzuna
    I know, you just like cute girls.
    correction I Absolutely Love cute girls and fan service

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    Looks great now. ^^

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    The wall looks really good!!!

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    Her secret is: She got raped last night by Hayama!

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    Her secret is: She got raped last night by Hayama!
    No, that's no secret. The SECRET is, two days before that she got it from Tomomi...
    And liked it. Ahh, I do feel bad for her.. ;.; being brainwashed into liking that stupid jerk Hayama.
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