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    Default Dos Bonita

    Yes, I realize the grammar and syntax are probably way off on this, but that's okay. I'm trying for a play on words. Dos Bonita= Two Beautiful. It's real simple if you think about it. ^_^

    Okay that aside, what needs fixing? I've put about twenty some odd layers into this-- merging them as I went.
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    I want to die peacefully in my sleep like my grandfather... not screaming and yelling like the passengers in his car.

    Now this, this I fly with pride.

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    The characters seem to be washed out; very common for a scan. Also, I am not really feeling that font. How about something simpler?

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    I agree with pooky, the characters look very washed out, try increasing the contrast on them or darkening just the face area. If the faces are darker I think that it will curb that washed out look.

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    tone down the brightness. i agree with them. a major wash out.

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    Okay, how's this look? I adjusted the brightness contrast and changed the font. Better? Worse? FYI, I'm still uploading some fonts to my machine (long story, don't ask) so any and all suggestions for a specific font type are more than welcomed. ^_^
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    I want to die peacefully in my sleep like my grandfather... not screaming and yelling like the passengers in his car.

    Now this, this I fly with pride.

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    Ah... zo cool

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    one thing..the blonde haired girl is a bit grainy.

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    Better?
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    I want to die peacefully in my sleep like my grandfather... not screaming and yelling like the passengers in his car.

    Now this, this I fly with pride.

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    a bit.....


    there are some spots where the image is pixilated.

    and if you want font......maybe you could try "vivaldi". it may look good but who knows. -shrugs-

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    Could you be a little more specific? Where is it pixelated exactly? I'm looking this thing over and am having a difficult time finding any spots. Vivaldi? You think that'll work? Hmmm...

    Okay. Changed the font to Vivaldi, and once more attempted to fix the image. Better? ^_^
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    I want to die peacefully in my sleep like my grandfather... not screaming and yelling like the passengers in his car.

    Now this, this I fly with pride.

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