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    Default sparks' night

    Hello! ^^ This one is killin' me XD.. I spent so much time on extracting her!, if there's still some edges visible, tell me
    now: I think there are many things to fix here,
    for example the water ripples:It should be corrent water, not a lake, but a river is more difficult than a lake, believe me! I was thinking about leaving calm water and making only pond ripples somewhere, but I'm not sure..
    the grass:is ok? and bamboo?
    if you find something that in your opinion needs changing... thanks!
    p.s.:It's a goto studio pict, found on mt ^^
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    Lovely work. Breathtaking.

    Actually, my only issue is the spark itself ^^; It doesn't look...active? Alive?

    Honestly it's more the original image than you, but it did draw my eye to it, looking more like an object than sparks.

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    Oh, this one is indeed nice ^_^

    Hm, ok, lets see, the grass is ok, but the chars shadow is not (and yes), the main prolem is that the light on the char comes from in front her (and at the same time from behind her - the moon). And you only drew the moon's shadow.
    Agree with Reiako about the spark, it looks so unnatural <_<
    Last edited by wizz-o-matic; 02-17-2005 at 09:15 AM.

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    I have to agree with both of them. The spark does seem to look a bit unnatural. The chars. shadow needs a bit of fixing up.

    overall, excellent work.

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    Yea I agree too, the shadow/lighting seems a bit weird, and the spark looks...too unrandom lol. Still it's a great wall ^^

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    *kisses your feet* My dear you are the Holy Trinity of wallpapering. You yet again get it right (for the most part) on the first try. Good job as always Aka. ^_^
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    Very nice work as usual ^^ One thing the moon is quite large but yet the ground is not lit up by it...I think the moon should give quite a bit of light to the area there..but it just seems its only on the water...I could barely see the bamboos..lol just a thought don't know if it matters too much..oh I don't know anymore..I agree with with sparks is unnatural looking.

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    thanks guys! sorry for the late posting but this weekend I'v been away from home (to be right I' should say that I've been back to home, 'cause normally I live away) and so I didn't check the forum, neither work on the wall...Your advices are great as always! I'll try to follw them, reducing a bit the size of the moon, putting a slight light on the grass, fixing her shadow and adjusting the sparks..I hope I didn't loss anything
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    Hello! ^^
    2.0 version: I've done all (also the bamboos and other things) except resizing the moon (I don't like it smaller very much)... the light in front of her comes both from the reflection on the water and the sparks( are they enough natural O.o)...I dunno if I can change a third time her shadow...I hope that on this version is better..if not tell me what to change again..
    Thankx!!
    p.s.: if you want to see the 1600 to judge better tell me
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    Oh, nice, the light is much better now, also the colors ^_^

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    I agree. Version 2.0 is more prettiful. ^_^
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    Perfect. ^^

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    That's definitely a lot better. the lighitng and colors have improved as well.


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    So, it's ready to be spread across the world wide web ^_^?
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    ok Updated on the website (go through the signature )with very few changes( added a part of glow on her, and fixed another time the bamboos...) I hope you like the 3.0 and definitive version( also in 1600 ^^ )
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