Go ahead, be harsh! I need it. But don't just say "it sucks" please, I want to know how to get better. XP
Featured girl is Mizuki Takase from Comic Party, and this is a scan from the Comic Party Funbook. It is official art, and the artist is Misato Mitsumi. No watermark because I think watermarks are kinda not so cool. I might if I drew the picture though. I've edited it now XD; It's half the size but I just can't bear to compress it any more!