I submitted a translation for DAYS of DASH (http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/sak...daysofdash.htm) but just noticed that I made a couple of clumsy mistakes (go me ><).
Firstly is on both occasions where it says "kimi to boku no naka de nani ga hajimatta no darou", can the translation be changed to "What has started inside you and me?"? For some reason I had it in my head that the lyrics were "nanika hajimatta no darou" instead xD.
Only other points were to fix the typo where I wrote "clusy" instead of "clumsy" and also near the end I forgot to put in "I'M A DREAMER" before "Right now our world is starting", so if that could be added too I'd be very grateful.
Thank you very much if you can help with this, I'll make sure to more thoroughly proofread my lyrics before submitting them next time.