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**Vintniv** · 04-05-2014 02:26 PM

**(_YvOnSo_)** · 04-05-2014 03:19 PM

Originally Posted by horrendous

i heard that in those the writers just ship the two least likely characters to get together, like Yugi and Mai Valentine. i've never read one myself because i also understand that the writers are mostly teenage otakus that failed Freshman English.

This guy needs real good editing of this fanfic, was really driving my OCD of bad grammar to it's limit. Either way though, the story-line was good, so it's worth it. I like to imagine that the fanfic itself is like a parallel world/different dimension of the original story-line, and it makes me feel like it all happened in that world.

**Sympathy** · 04-05-2014 03:35 PM

Originally Posted by (_YvOnSo_)

This guy needs real good editing of this fanfic, was really driving my OCD of bad grammar to it's limit. Either way though, the story-line was good, so it's worth it. I like to imagine that the fanfic itself is like a parallel world/different dimension of the original story-line, and it makes me feel like it all happened in that world.

case in point. i can't stand writers who haven't mastered the english language yet, as a writer myself it drives me up a wall to see people half-a$$ it.

**Hanamaru Kunikida** · 04-05-2014 04:05 PM

Originally Posted by aether

why you copy my sig in your post?

**Digimon_Sommelier** · 04-05-2014 06:06 PM

I love the Chelsea neighborhood!

**(_YvOnSo_)** · 04-05-2014 09:57 PM

Originally Posted by horrendous

case in point. i can't stand writers who haven't mastered the english language yet, as a writer myself it drives me up a wall to see people half-a$$ it.

Zero no Tsukaima novel translations I read online were even worse, but I had to deal with it because I was totally immensed into the story for it to stop me.

**Qoco** · 04-05-2014 11:14 PM

**AbedFa** · 04-06-2014 03:28 AM

Gotta post something, can't be helped :|

**Sympathy** · 04-06-2014 11:11 AM

okay so i live in michigan and my girlfriend lives in illinois, and we were discussing me coming down to see her. i just bought a moped and she did some research and found out that the greyhound will actually bring my moped down there with me. since neither of us have cars that would be our only way around town. the only problem is my brother put the moped entirely on his credit and i'm making payments to him, so if he said i couldn't take it with me, that'd be the end of it. but if that fails i can always rent a car because my girlfriend just got her license. so yeah... after my next paycheck i'm going to take my next two days off to go down and see her... so fking excited.

**darksky967** · 04-06-2014 12:47 PM

Originally Posted by horrendous

okay so i live in michigan and my girlfriend lives in illinois, and we were discussing me coming down to see her. i just bought a moped and she did some research and found out that the greyhound will actually bring my moped down there with me. since neither of us have cars that would be our only way around town. the only problem is my brother put the moped entirely on his credit and i'm making payments to him, so if he said i couldn't take it with me, that'd be the end of it. but if that fails i can always rent a car because my girlfriend just got her license. so yeah... after my next paycheck i'm going to take my next two days off to go down and see her... so fking excited.

**Yung A$$eroya** · 04-06-2014 12:55 PM

I want so shave my eyebrows off

**darksky967** · 04-06-2014 01:00 PM

Originally Posted by Asseroya

I want so shave my eyebrows off

**Yung A$$eroya** · 04-06-2014 01:09 PM

I want to kiss Arin Hanson on his 5th chin

**Midge** · 04-06-2014 01:43 PM

I think jumping off a cliff sounds cool... >.>

**Yung A$$eroya** · 04-06-2014 01:44 PM

Agh I did it again .-.

**Midge** · 04-06-2014 01:47 PM

Hey, if we all died... none of us would live >.>

I gave my dog a bath today. She ended up jumping into a flower pot and soiled herself..... -_-
Animals, so stupid sometimes.

**aether** · 04-06-2014 07:38 PM

**(_YvOnSo_)** · 04-06-2014 07:40 PM

Was reading the fan-fiction I've been reading for the past few days, only problems I had in it were the grammar issues. Everything else story-wise, was good. Now they put a hentai scene in it. That ruined it for me. Don't put a hentai scene on characters who would never even think about something as ecchi as that. Ughh..