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    Smile 1640mP - Time Machine

    http://www.animelyrics.com/doujin/vo...aimumashin.htm

    Mostly about transliteration word-splitting, some separate words are lumped together while some individual words are split. Just for the sake of readability.

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    Verse #1
    tokuigeni tsubuyaita shinpainaikarato
    tokuige ni tsubuyaita shinpainai kara to
    Verse #2
    toutotsu ni narihibiku boku wo yobuwakare no oto
    toutotsu ni narihibiku boku wo yobu wakare no oto
    Verse #3
    kanashi kunankanaisato iyahon de tojikometayo
    kanashiku nanka nai sa to iyahon de tojikometa yo
    Verse #4
    mietanda bonyarito kotatakai kinou no bijon
    mietanda bonyari to atatakai kinou no bijon

    migi to hidari ni hirogatte boku wo tsurete ikunosa
    migi to hidari ni hirogatte boku wo tsureteiku no sa (or tsureteyuku)
    Verse #5
    boku no yoko wo surinukete toozakatte ikukeshiki
    boku no yoko wo surinukete toozakatteiku keshiki (or toozakatteyuku)
    (-iku and keshiki are clearly separate words)

    Verse #6
    koboreta namida hitoshizuku no imi mo wakarazuni
    koboreta namida hitoshizuku no imi mo wakarazu ni
    Last verse
    taimumashin ni yurarete mata modottekuruyo
    taimumashin ni yurarete mata modottekuru yo
    And the translation for a few lines
    声が遮られていく 身振り手振りで伝える
    「いってらっしゃい」のサイン
    Voice is blocked and communicating with gestures
    The "Come back safely" sign
    Our voices are blocked, so with your gestures you said
    'Please come back safely' ('see you later'?)


    タイムマシンにゆられて 明日も元気でいるよ
    I wish that you'll be healthy and be shaken by the time machine
    As the time machine rocks my body, I wish that you'll be alright

    溢れる涙抑えきれず 意味も分からずに
    タイムマシンにゆられて また戻ってくるよ
    Not able to hold back the overflowing tears, not knowing the meaning
    I'll be shaken by the time machine and come back again
    I don't know the meaning behind these overflowing tears
    whispered "I'll be back", as the time machine rocks my body

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    Default Re: 1640mP - Time Machine

    Bump~

    The submitter was last seen online 2012.. I guess I'll have to wait

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    Default Re: 1640mP - Time Machine

    Ehh...

    I'll get to this later - you see, @t12111 has their own site even when they've stopped submitting to AL so I might need to look out for them, but there is reasonable doubt that their work is not authentic.

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