I decided to make a song in Japanese out of nowhere even though my grammar is horrible. Here's the first line I made:
止まれ、止まれ、息をやめてくれよ。
あなたが息に値するじゃない。
アホバカ。
I think the "するじゃない" part is wrong, along with the "くれよ" part, but I'm not sure.
Any suggestions?
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